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for Chains of Fool's Gold

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule October 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #5..

Good ole Hagrid comes thru again. :-) I think I mentioned this a while back, but
when this is all over, Harry & Draco are going to need a real vacation..seriously.
person SP777
schedule October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #4..

Yeah...even I gotta admit that was pretty good. :-/

...and maybe I have a sadistic sense of humor, but it WAS funny when Draco pushed
Ron hard on purpose, under the pretense he was just 'looking after his welfare'. :-)
schedule October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Actually, Hermione is right here..... there is always a way around using Unforgiveables if you look for it. The problem is that Harry and Malfoy have been on their own for so long that they have gotten into the thinking that they need to use those spells.

A great story thus far.
person SP777
schedule September 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh I thought it might foreshadow something like Draco being in peril soon.
person SP777
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
#2...

..and now we get down to it! At this point I'm curious how you'll do
this and what different strategy you'll bring to the table when it comes
to the Ministry confrontation. By the way, who is the Minister?

Are we foreshadowing with the Thestral?
person delia cerrano
schedule September 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Always enjoy your stories so am glad to start another.
person SP777
schedule September 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Heh! You know, I really wish I could draw realistically, because I definitely would do a
scene where Draco is standing behind Harry with an uppity look on his aristocratic face,
with a stiff upper lip...complete with scowl :-)

That was a humorous moment, probably the only one, right?

You know leave it to Hermione to bring it up that their plan is kind of half assed. Hey, it
isn't their fault they are not seeing the big picture, yet. But, that is good point..once they expose
the corruption, then what? Will they hold some type of election with suitable candidates to take over
certain seats in the Ministry when the corruption is exposed?

Oh well...they'll 'flesh' it out.

By the way, how far are you going with this series???