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for Chains of Fool's Gold

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule December 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about the end....

Aww, is that it?

It's been a long journey for the both of them, I have to say of all the characterizations of Harry & Draco,
I liked this one the most. They felt more real to me.

Also I had my favorite stories in this series, 'Working With Them', 'Evening Star', & 'The Library of Hades'.
Anyway, good job on this monster of a series...and I bet you won't do this again. :-)
person SP777
schedule December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #14...

It's too bad, Draco would have made a great Head Auror and simply cleaned the place
from the inside out...and by all means go ahead & use the name. :-)

So I take it, this is it?
person SP777
schedule December 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #13...

1. "Piss it out your ear,"
- I like that. I think I'll use it to confuse some of my coworkers. :-D

2. He gestured, and Harry leaned forwards from his own mare's back. Their lips met to a chorus
of shocked gasps, shouts of outrage, laughter, and a few camera flashes

-I KNEW once some idiot asked how they'd change, I was hoping you'd do something like that. :-)

3. Individual lives are not necessarily expendable, but are not as precious.
person SP777
schedule November 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #12..

Okay, I'm not sure if I mentioned this but..I really have the jury out on Hale.
Me no trust.

Just a few more to go, huh.
person SP777
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about 11..

Yeah, this chapter did seem a little TOO calm, despite the screaming...until
that little incident! Whoops there it is! :-)

I guess the chaos shall commence?
person SP777
schedule November 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was just mentioning those things [dinner, flowers, etc..] in general, you make
it sound like you would put them in one whole chapter...I hope not. No, courtship
shouldn't be the same thing men have done over the years to the point just mentioning
them make them sound clich
person SP777
schedule November 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about 9...

Looking at this interaction between Harry & Draco, as well as in "Charming.., it
makes me wonder when you get thru with both of these stories completely, have you ever
thought about doing an old fashioned love story?

I mean you could pull it off. I miss the stories on courtship..plain & simple. The wooing,
the music, the slow dances, etc.. you get what I mean?

Ever thought of that?
person SP777
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #8..

You know, I'm so used to the both of them being Aurors that it would be kind
of sad to see the both of them leave their positions. They're really good at
it.

Besides what else could they do, you haven't exactly emphasized any other strengths they might have.
person SP777
schedule October 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #7...

Question: what would the Draco of the past think & feel about this Draco
of the future?

...and I don't know about anyone else but I would definitely give the both
of them [Draco & Weasley] an Emmy, at least. They have me convinced. :-)

When are we going to get to the Ministry?
person SP777
schedule October 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #6..

WEll I, for one, can't wait to see this plan finally go into action. Are they
still going to stage it for all to see?