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by goldhorse

schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There was nothing sub-par in this latest chapter, so don't think that feeling bad has any adverse affect on your writing! I love how Draco and Hermione were able to make it back to each other. p.s. I have listed you as a favorite author on my profile page because your stories are always so moving.
person Kain
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story although I was slightly saddened that Ron was going to be saddled with the role of the "bad guy" for the sake of making Draco look better. I will say this though, both he and Ron are hypocrites since they both were asses to Hermione at one time or another and can't really judge the other on that front. It came off as odd too me that Rose seems to prefer Malfoy too her actual father despite that in the middle of his rant he openly said he was not that good of a person while condemning Ron. Ron can be an ass to Malfoy but Draco is not a saint himself in his treatment or thoughts towards Ron and does not get called on that while Rose and Hermione blow up at Ron and hold his mistakes over his head.

Curious on how things will be between everyone now that it's out that Hermione essentially settled for Ron and stringed him along and has been keeping secrets from everyone.

Still this is an awesome story.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-
person Bre95
schedule September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! I love it!!!! It's sooo sad but soooo great!!!! And I'm really hoping its not over yet!!!!!! I hate ur when your stories and because you write them so perfectly!!!!! I love see your name on stories!!!!!! Can't wait for the next one or the next chapter if there is one??
person goldhorsefan
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think most of the chappie is missing.
person goldhorsefan
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Did Chapter 4 just disappear?
person goldhorsefan
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chappie; now that it is all here. That was weird. Can't wait for the next one.
person MB 3
schedule September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I swear, every story you write has me hooked within the first few chapters. This one is definitely different from your other stories, but I like it. I'm hooked enough that while stretching today, I looked in the mirror, and thought "I look like a ballerina." I can guarantee you that thoughts like that don't normally occur to me. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
person Amanda
schedule September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I bawled during all the chapters. you never fail to inspire.
person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter and I have adored the twist that has Draco making her music boxes. It is so dedicated and thoughtful. Please write a resolution that has them happily married with Lucius twisting in the wind (I don't mean that literally....but it would work).

I've known a couple of ballet dancers like Rose, too. They really do brush off bleeding toes like that. The men are just as bad.

Maybe you could have the 'blended' family do a movie night with Christmas specials? Then Draco could make her a music box with the Peanuts tune. You know how fond I am of that!

person goldhorsefan
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is agonizing! When is Old Lucius going to stop ruining their fun? They deserve their happy ending. This waiting is like edge play. You are an amazing writer.