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person Marie
schedule March 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story I hope you will continue with it.
schedule February 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like it. A LOT. ALOT, ALOT, ALOT of fun!

I like that Harry, Sirius, and Remus are handling this realistically. In the real world, one coming from a year-long coma(or longer) has a lot of issues with cognitive dissonance between what they remember and what is currently happening around them. They also experience a certain measure of agoraphobia, anxiety, and fear of crowds and strangers.

This aspect of waiting, worrying, and being unable to cope is very consistent and thorough through the story. I like it. It would be very interesting to see how Harry develops and progresses from his state of fear and hesitance in situations beyond Remus and Sirius.

And let me say, Remus and Sirius with Harry in the middle, HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!!!

I would have LOVED having a pair of devoted, loving carying, HOT older guys to bond me in between them at Harry's age. I knew even then, what I wanted. (P.S. I'm still looking for my perfect pair.)
person eaglexeyes
schedule January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story -----

looking forward for next updates ------

keep writing as life allows ------
person ChaosLady
schedule January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Progress...
person BAFan
schedule December 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4

OMG. Great sex scene plus plenty of conversations before and after...wonderful chapter. Sorry I'm a bit behind in my reviewing; hope to catch up soon.
person ChaosLady
schedule December 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great!
person jujukitty
schedule November 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
interesting start to things, i like the twist on the bond that you used, once again i can see where you used ideas from previous stories but have managed to change things into a completely new and original story. i'm kinda afraid to hear the shrieking i have a feeling that will be coming from certain females though lol. keep up the good work :D
person pooh
schedule November 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a chapter...am going to have to go back and re-read the first chapters to see what I have already forgotten...
looking forward to the next chapter...patient as ever!!!yeah right as most fanfiction fans are!!!
as to keep up on updates, I still have not gotten on facebook...I know, just an old foggy! spend too much time reading fanfiction and other research...thank you for your work!
person pooh
schedule November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ARGGG! can't wait for the next chapter. The tension stays high and fast moving...well done...
schedule October 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
write more its really good