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Poor Severus.   I wish they would break down and talk to each other.  They both need closeness and caring they would get from each other.

Oh please, you can't stop there. More. More. More.

*slightly dazed* Wow. This is beyond brilliant:)

Why?! Why stop there?! Ugh you writers and your cliffies ~pouts~

chapt 1-3: A winner of a story. But Draco is dead??? Oh no...I like Draco so much.

I want more of this story!!! Please update soon!!

Forgive me if my questions are answered in the next chapter. I don't get it. 1. Harry was caughing up blood. Ran to Snape, coughed up more blood, ran back up to Dumbledor's office, and didn't drink the healing potion. It dosn't take a doctoor to tell most people that a ruptured lung is life threatening. Most people bleeding from the lungs are in pain and have trouble breathing. 2. Snape didn't fulfill the unbreakable vow so he should be dead. 3. Harry took another beating and seem to be fine--at least healthy enough to run up to his doorm from the dongons to get a book (with an unhealed ruptured lung?) Is this an au or just a long pwp?

Ok. I get it. I'm not confused anymore. This is a smutty pwp. Plot holes are cute in lemons/pwp's. Who cares about broken ribs and why Harry dumpped Ginny when Snape' got Harry against a desk. :) From your story summary I was expecting a more serious Snarry romance. Plot holes aren't so cute in those types of stories. Keep writing.

Yowza! Looks like this is going to be an intense very hot story! atching for the next chapter alrady.