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for Love On The Rock

by sheherazade

schedule December 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whooo, an update! I'll accept that fate works in mysterious ways and brought them together. Call it karma for Ruby turning her life around. =)

I liked that, and I'm looking forward to seeing all that Severus is going to do to get her back. :3
schedule December 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was sooo excited to see this story up again...especially on Christmas Eve!! I like Tom (Severus), and Snape's reaction to having to woe Ruby. I hope there is more and that this is not the end of the story *big pleading puppy-dog eyes*. As always...More Please!
schedule October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!! I have been waiting patiently (I'm lying) for this chapter. I love Snape's struggles with the knickers and his self-control. The note was so sad *sniff*. I can't wait for more!!!! BTW, I am listening to Meeting Her Match, and she is on her way to spend a week with 'his lordship'. I am loving the book!!!!
schedule October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Spane is jealous and he has exposed himself as a wizard in the muggle world!!! How will Ruby react??? She knows that he is different, can she accept this difference too? I hope so!!! More, Please.
schedule September 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter 4 and I had to post!!!! Oh, my gosh...the slow build up of the spankings and Ruby's intentional errors was wonderful! I love that Snape is using Ruby to relieve some of his own sexual frustration. But, the final spanking with the ruler and the subsequent events was PRICELESS!!! I know that this follows closely the story line from 'Secretary', but reading, rather than watching is much more intense. The final section about Snape envisioning Ruby hanging from hooks, in nothing but cuffs and a collar was almost overwhelming *heavy breathing...moan*!!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
schedule September 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, what a Wonderful chapter. I loved Ruby's intentional smoking to get Snape's attention. The subsequent spanking was awe inspiring!! Especially with Ruby's selection of undergarments. I love that Snape needed to see the full effect of his punishment and then felt the need to anoint it too. I impatiently *snicker* await your next chapter! p.s. I added this story on my profile, under 'Currently Reading'...I just had to share!?!?!?!?
person Katherine
schedule September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story years ago when I first read it. I am hoping you post the sequel too.
schedule September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love the way Severus 'demands' the changes in Ruby that he wants. The order that she will not 'cut' herself again is excellently done. I can't wait to see what Severus has planned for such an obvius submissive, as Ruby. LOVE IT!!! p.s. I checked out your pseudonym and have orders one story for my Kindle and one story for my iPod *I am excited*. More, Please!!!
schedule August 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, a cutter and a jealous Malfoy. Delicious!
schedule August 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am definitely loving this story. Snape (and I) can only imagine all the dirty little things he can do to he 'PA'. I hope she will be "assisting" him with some very naughty jobs!!

I loved Narcissa's little speech about Snape liking "submissive little things like her".

I like that you kept the 'cutting' aspect...but a Carving Knife; wow.

More, please!!!