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for In His Place

by SpeedyTomato

person autumngold
schedule June 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Dumbledore is creepy! I can't believe he is trying to manipulate Harry into going back to school. What is that going to accomplish? Does he have more hoops he wants Harry to jump through? I am so glad that nobody is going to let Harry be alone with Dumbledore again. That man is completely insane! Outstanding new chapter! Can't wait for more!
schedule May 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far. good work on how you've advanced the relationship between draco and harry into a closer friendship. bit put out by the suggestion of giving them marauder names without them becoming animagi first as the names are truly based on their alternate form. hopefully you will have them undergo that, especially if it involves meditation as I'm sure that would also assist harry in controlling his new seer powers.
schedule May 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sad to say but Fleur's death was her own damn fault. She was warned and didn't listen. I am just glad that Bill wasn't the one to find her, so that he can remember as she was and not be haunted by seeing her like that.

No matter what Harry does or says, Ginny is going to freak out. She has had this fantasy about him for forever. I am sure that Ron and Molly are going to have some extreme reactions too and will jump to defend 'poor, sweet Ginny' from the evil boy who dares to reject her. URGH! I feel for Harry...truly I do. I hope that he thinks to take someone with him for support!
person history
schedule April 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! It's one of my fav of yours. I like how you made harry a seer. It was a really good diea!
person slmncpm
schedule April 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i love this chapter. i love that they are getting along so splendidly and that dudley is changing and that harry can do so much that he didn't know he could, even with the limitations. *hands you scones*
schedule April 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and how it is totally different from other hurt Hurry stories. Keep up the good work. Please e-mail me when you have updates at onecent1960@hotmail.com
Thanks
person victoria
schedule March 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
like it
person chameleon
schedule March 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey

I have heard a lot oabout you from other others. Everyone likes your stories. So I read one of your stories and I like it well done. Do U have stories on archiveofoirown? If not that's fine. Anyway good luck in your stories
person slmncpm
schedule March 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story, thank you so much for the update!
person pooh
schedule March 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Start with the can't wait for the next chapter!!! Am loving this story, the action, tension, clear descriptions, and the flow of the story...
there's so much to say about the story, but its past bed time.