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for In His Place

by SpeedyTomato

person Kat
schedule March 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!!! I can just see Harry taking out people with his cane!!! Sooo smart!!!
person autumngold
schedule March 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love your new update! After Harry's actions in the alley, everyone is going to want to carry a cane for protection. Hopefully this will help keep Harry safer from the dark side. It was good that they all, even Harry, were able to get a laugh out of it. Excellent new chapter! Can't wait for more!
person autumngold
schedule February 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing new chapter! I just hope that Harry can get through his eye appointment alright. Hopefully, if there is trouble, it won't be until afterwards. At least they don't have to worry about Dumbledore being there. I could just picture him trying to manipulate something during Harry's appointment. Outstanding update! Thank you for your excellent new chapter! Can't wait for more!
person staar
schedule February 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
of all I read the thing that has me going is the trip to the eye dr., man hope all goes well1!!so happy thatHarry and Draco are getting along ...Thanks for this !!!!
person autumngold
schedule January 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope I am wrong, but I don't see how Dumbledore will ever change. He is so used to always thinking he knows best that I don't think he will believe that Harry doesn't have to fight Voldemort. It is scary how far he would take things to throw an injured, untrained teenager in front of a madman. Thank you for your fabulous new chapter! Hope you have an excellent New Year!
person Aka
schedule December 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick note for you to know that Andromeda is supposed to look like Bellatrix not Narcissa. Other than that this chapter was ok, seemed more like a filler thing though.
person staar
schedule December 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update...hope Tonks mom and dad are going to be safe...........see you soon !!!!!!!!!
person autummngold
schedule December 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your excellent new chapter! I feel so sorry for the Weasley family. First Bill loses Fleur, and now Molly and Albus lose their son. I just hope the family doesn't turn against Harry and start blaming him. If they listen to Dumbledore too much they might. Wonderful update! I can't wait for more!
person Mackenzie
schedule November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i really love your story and can't wait for you to upload more
person lil_sis4556
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story and although not stated it seems like it could be a crossover between HP and an old TV series called the Dead Zone.