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for Independence of the Dark

by Callisto

person djaddict
schedule August 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really intrigued by this story. Eagerly anticipating more
person delia cerrano
schedule August 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Now here is a different view of the dark side and the magical world. I'll be following this story. Here is my email to let me know when chpts come up: valcarrier@aol.com Thanks
person Leania07
schedule August 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh Draco had that prickly feeling, didn't he, that someone was watching him. Interesting place you've taken this, Dark Ones; made me think initially demonic with they eyes, but much better. I understand, they're not demons, just what my mind thought of first. Of course Harry would succeed, other wise 1.) this would've been a very short, anti-climatic story, and 2.) he's way to hard headed, stubborn, and ambitious to fail. So what is Harry going to do to train? One of the estates? Can't wait for the Dumbledore smack down, pretentious prick trying to steal Harry's things; hope he has a way to get back at him before he makes him suffer and die. Discredit his 'noble' cause and such.

Keep up the good work, and of course I'd love to be on your mailing list ( ^.^ ).
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
person mistalis
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
enjoying, and I want more. Please keep this story going.
person Leania07
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is moving along so deliciously! Draco was pouting, hmm? I wonder why (sure we'll know in the later chapters of course, but I suspect it's because Harry got away from him.) I like how this is going so far, keep up the good work, I look forward to more!

By the way, I tried looking up this story on fanfiction.net but couldn't locate it (so many titles!) and your penname I'm not sure I looked at the correct one. Link on your bio page?

Leania
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE LET REMUS BE ON HARRYS SIDE! UPDATE SOOON
person tony5021
schedule August 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think harry will make a very good dark lord. I can't wait union Draco is in the picture, too!
Please, don't make us wait so long for the next chapters. I'm hooked!
person L
schedule August 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this so far! Most of the time when writers make Harry dark, it isn't very believable. You have managed to keep him Harry, but change him enough so he is recognizable as a character yet different to fit your story. Kudos to you!

I can't wait to see what happens next with young Harry, as he embarks on his quest!
person M
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good start! Interested to see what comes next. Can't wait for the next update! :)