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I say that Draco should be Harry's first....and by the way I love this story and can't wait for more

just finished reading and i am in love with this story.
please add me to the email list.i would appreciate it greatly.
i am enthralled with the way this story is panning out i just read 5 chapters non stop because i didn't want it to end and needed to know what will happen next.
this is a wonderful treat of a story and i cant wait to read what is to come and please update again soon.

I'm really loving the story, can't wait for the really dark parts. When I first read it, I was really hoping for mostly bottom!Draco but I don't mind where this story is heading either! You make me really want to read it despite that. But I'm definitely hoping Draco would be his first. I think it'd be more meaningful that way, not really sure if Draco himself is a virgin (I secretly hope so) a lot of authors tend to write him as really experienced but I think as a pureblood, they are more strict. But either way, yes to Draco as his first. Especially since he seems so nice and sweet(especially with the elf), I'd think he be quite disappointed if he sees Harry with someone else. I'll feel sad for him. Though Jacques is a little cutie, I rather Draco be Harry's one and only. Please update soon!

I am really enjoying the story. I would also prefer if Draco was Harry's one and only.

Great story! Read from start to finish in one sitting! Love that the snakes have hatched and Harry has his wand. Harry should definitely experiment some before getting with Draco - I vote for fling!

Brief fling! Brief fling! Brief fling!

this is so good! the tiny green snake is hilariously sassy. i would love to see Draco get all cute and pouty seeing Harry with Jacques before they got together for real. i love a pouty Draco. also the Dark Ones are very sexual beings. only makes sense that they seen others before settling down

I am loving this so far! Cannot wait for your next update! I do wonder if the Dark Ones will have Harry use a time-turner to train or something else. Oh, I would love to see Draco be Harry's first, I think that will create a stronger bond between them, which Harry will need with all the craziness he will be dealing with.

I've come late to this story, so I hope my review comments will be helpful.

I like your take on a "Dark" Harry, and wondered if you're going for a full gay, or possibly bi, take.

If you want him to be totally gay, then by all means, give him some experience before he takes on the blond slyth.

Or, perhaps you want Draco to be the knowing one.

If he's to be bi, then maybe he'll have a girl or two to practice his sexual arts with. It can't hurt to be experienced when it comes to lovemaking, but only Draco can have his heart.

Does any of this help??

Well it's been a while since I read it so I started over at the beginning. I loved the flirty bit, that was hysterical. Personally, I'd love for Draco to be his first, and the way that the Dark Ones sound, they don't go off on flings and such. Still enjoying this story, keep it coming ^.^

Leania