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for Independence of the Dark

by Callisto

person delia cerrano
schedule March 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Dra co, Dra co, Dra co! I'm on team "Draco for First Time" for sure. Andreas is very nice but I don't know...he has no history with Harry and he has his own problem. Can't you find him someone else? How about Ginny or Blaise or Ha Ha Ha Severus. Hmmm yes Severus or even Remus whose gentle smart and loyal nature would care for him and make Andreas first in his life which he has never had. And that way they could both watch over Harry. Draco is coming soon I hope.
person Sharae
schedule February 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it, please continue and add me to your update mail list ?
person j
schedule February 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Excited to see another dark powerful Harry story. Excited to learn more about his tutors. Harry needs to experience a dark handsome vampire. As much as I like Harry and Draco its fun to see Draco squirm a little. Possessive Draco is hot
person ails
schedule February 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hey just found this story on the bus ride home...its a great story hope you update soon.
person Mocca
schedule February 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That's wonderful story . Details but not very details . Some story just has ver long details . I love your story . May i ask ?? How come Draco will be Harry "first" if they don't spend enough time together ?! And i very grateful theres "no cling" . Coz i like them so much so i don't want to share . Forgive me coz my rudeness . *grin shepples* I just want they belong each other first . But if i follow your story , i will assume that Harry will become like Dark Ones . Wrap just each other not one else .
person Krisianna
schedule February 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't mind Harry having a fling, but still feel that he would hesitate to have a relationship with a shopkeeper's assistant (Jacques), not sure about an instructor. I feel that he would most likely choose wait until after the training is done, but some hot, steamy fantasies might be fun to read. :P Sadly, Harry just doesn't seem the type to 'give' himself to someone else he hardly knows(whether top or bottom), so regardless, there will probably have to be a great deal of trust built up first.

Sorry about the anonymous reviews, but I just can't get AFF to allow me to review logged in for some reason.
person nari-chan
schedule February 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
im glad to see that you are back and i wish you all the best wishes :)
i cant wait to see what is to come next! what will the charms teacher have to say to our hero and when does draco come into the picture? and does blowjobs or handjobs count as sex? because if not harry and our vampire friend can still have some fun after training.....
please update again soon !!!!
person Leania07
schedule February 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh how interesting, I'm sure Filius will be an insider for Harry; being part creature himself he understands the injustices done upon creatures better than anyone, all but Remus anyway. Not sure if you'll have Harry tell him all that Dumbledore has done or not, but I think he would be appalled. Glad to hear Harry will get as much time as he needs to get the training done, especially 'taming' his magic. Is it really taming or more of finding acceptance and/or proving his worth to use it? Can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the good work. So glad to see updates again ^.^

Leania
person delia cerrano
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm anxious for Draco to get here and stake his claim on Harry. There are too many posers showing up and Draco is one of my favorites as well as they have some history. Hurry Harry because I worry what Voldemort has in mind for Draco much less poor Lucius. Harry could protect him/them I hope. And absolutely yes Draco should be Harry's first!
person savannah.morgan
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and was so excited to see a new chapter....I am looking forward to the training and his return to Hogwarts. And I can't wait for Harry and Draco when they get together. Look forward to more.