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for Instinctive

by goldhorse

person Lexy
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More. More! For the love of Merlin please write more!
person XiaoZhen
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is so interesting!!! I can't wait to see the rest. I'm very intrigued on how you're gonna end this. There's multiple scenario that I can think of, but the most realistic I think would leave them as they are now. I mean, there's the whole pups thing, and of course if they do manage to communicate with the keepers, they are just muggles. Most likely they will send Draco and the others to scientists. And even if they managed to contact the wizarding world, there's no guarantee that there will br antitode. Even if there is, what will happen to Luna and the pups? It's a bit confusing but since you mentioned that this is already finish, I'm even more intrigued on how you're going to progress with this. I can't wait!!
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
want to read more!!!!
person sillygreeneyes
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely fucking awesome! I definitely want to read more!! You freaking rock!!!
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this wasn't what I was expecting.... But you really have outdone yourself with this one. I like it! You're reveals aren't too sudden and your wolf characterizations are just perfect! :D I just wish I could write half as well as this....
person Shani
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I love it!:-)
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg. I love this! It's similar but so different from what you have done so far! I can't wait to read more and so glad I noticed it! Glad Harry isn't as dense as Ron.
person angel0fmusic
schedule August 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I like where it's going, but the description on where they are as far as enclosures is a bit confusing. Great story though.