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for Beauty and the Beast

by Nocturne

person Victoria
schedule August 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, Chapter 8 ended with a truly surprising twist. We have learned much more about Draco. Now he is a more complex character. The story keeps getting better as it goes along.
person delia cerrano
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The dungeon? They are going to the dungeon? What on earth is that about? I must be thick today because I have no idea.
person lolo
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
you seem to like using the sentence "the former head girl" a lot but you dont need to use it that much
person Victoria
schedule August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very suspenseful. Our Hermione is braver than I would be, leaving herself vulnerable to an altered Draco who has murdered so many. Let's hope his rage isn't triggered by passion. A fascinating story. Sad that dear Theo had to die; he's one of my favorite characters.
person colao
schedule August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my...nothing like a sex cliffie to get me hooked. I like your adult spin on this fairytale.
person delia cerrano
schedule August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Zowie!! Hermione?? Draco yeah but Hermione? Aww sorry about Nott...he seemed like a good guy to build into a story even.
No way out of the curse? Not with Hermione and Harry on the case!
person Victoria
schedule August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was exhilarating and rapturous. Great scene. I am hopeful that all that passion broke the curse on Draco.
person delia cerrano
schedule August 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Looks like we are in for a lot of angst with this one (Ron/Hermione breakup & workaholic 'Mione, horribly hurt Draco). Going to give it a try in spite of the heavy angst because I've always been a sucker for Beauty & the Beast stories.