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I knew she would overdose soon if she wasn't careful! This chapter was really good, and I can't wait for the next installment!
So, the seller guy, did he just transport the already made potions to his hand? The use of the word 'conjured' there could be misleading if that's the case. I'm pretty sure that's what you meant, but I'm just making sure, you know?
Keep it up!

I was confused by your recent chapter. Last we left off, Hermione and Draco were at the Burrow and she asked to be taken home, then suddenly Hermione is talking out loud in her own flat. I think your most recent chapter "Scars" is mixed up. The following reads: "'Don't go. Stay with me here. Please.' Hermione and Draco apparated to his apartment. Hermione looked around at everything, from the black leather sectional couch, to the walls covered in books." The first line is after Hermione has the nightmare and Draco is already at her place; however, you then have them apparating to Draco's place. I'm assuming from the time they apparated to Draco's apartment to the "end" of the chapter should be in the beginning and the 'Stay with me...' part should be somewhere near the end. I hope that you will be able to fix the chapter and give it a proper ending. Thanks for writing!

I love this story! So much angst! Are you planning on making the chapters any longer? I certainly hope so! Anyway, thanks for writing! I must reiterate how much I like this story so far. Poor Hermione... Sitting on the curb because she can't figure out which direction to go... Sigh... I hope you update soon!

I'm finding that I quite like this Draco. Hermione seems slightly unhinged too from the usual Hermione Granger than authors portray:) I can't wait for the next chapter to see how this continues:)

Enjoyed the first 2 chapters. Hermione definitely has addiction issues, hard to not understand why. The story already has me wanting more. Please continue the story!

It was an interesting beginning, although I do think you rushed the interaction with Draco. I'm guessing Hermione is addicted to the dreamless sleep potion, as there is no other reason that I can account for her treatment of the shop witch.