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AWESOME!!!

While I am not happy that Harry is having a flashback, I am glad that the people who need to see first-hand just how bad off he is get to see it happen. It is, after all, their faults that he and Sirius suffered so much for so long.....I do hope that Maggie won't be too traumatized by it, though. She is innocent and doesn't deserve to share in her parents guilt.

Though this may sound heartless, I'm actually glad Harry is having a flashback to one of his worst moments, just so he can get it out of his system and start healing. Sort of like lancing a festering wound. Yes, it's going to hurt but it will be clean and can start to heal.

As a purely strategic view, the flashback couldn't have come at a better time in order for the still disbelieving potters and DD to actually see the results of their actions. Their punishment was too light, at minimum they should be destitute and hopefully this will cause them a fraction of the pain Harry and Sirius have had to endure. I wonder why the entire estate wasn't turned over to Harry and Sirius?

Whew! Pardon my vindictiveness but you have really captured my emotions in this story. Can't wait for more!

Oh, poor Harry. After not getting any real justice at the trial, he has to see that stupid dog. After hearing about everything that Harry had gone through I think it is pretty horrid that they brought it with them to the ministry. It's almost like they don't think they have hurt Harry enough. Incredible new chapter! After this, I hope that Harry sues Lily, James and Albus for everything they own! Can't wait for more!

First I have to say I love the story. Poor Harry and Maggie this is going to flip her out. James and Lily are going to want to help or freeze up and probable make the situation worse. I do have a question though why isn't the Ministry going after the kids, I mean taking them away or at least insisting on counseling for them and and having them observed. I mean the Potters and Dumbledore have already proven to be unfit and put a child at risk. I mean just staying and and making sure they took him in, putting a ward around him, a delayed letter and so much more they could of done. Then there is the fact they are still keeping information how ever useful it may be, from all that involve and putting people at risk. The kids even I mean do they have any idea of what there parents did.

I like your story. However, I would like to offer some advice on the writing style. If you stop using the same phrases over and over, such as "press on" "we'll work with that" and so forth, it will make the stories read better. The repetitiveness that shows up in overuse of words or phrases takes away from your story. Also, your characters repeat each other. Instead of repeating what the first character says maybe just say, that's a good idea. something other than the redundancy of repeating the words.

I really like your storylines, just wanted to offer a small tidbit of info to help.

Is it wrong of me to hope that Harry sues James, Lily and Dumbledore? It makes me so mad that they have gotten away with what they did to their son, running away to protect themselves and never even trying to check to find out if Harry was ok. The three of them deserve to be punished in everyway possible. Harry doesn't need their help when it comes to Voldemort, Dumbledore is probably just going to try to get Harry to kill himself anyway. Outstanding new chapter! Can't wait for more!

Wonderful new chapter! My heart just breaks for Harry in your story! I am so glad that Dumbledore and the Potters are at least going to have to pay some fines to make up for their mistakes. For some reason though, knowing Dumbledore, I doubt if his manipulations are over. I hope he ends up in prison where he belongs. It has always disgusted me that he left a small child alone on a doorstep when it would have been so easy to just ring the doorbell. Excellent update! Can't wait for more!

So glad that Harry came out of the surgery fine. Unfortunately, this is only just another step in the healing of his body with more surgery to come. The healing of his mind will take far longer....

It's one of my fav chapter! I love how Sirius thought in this chapter of Harry and the relationship that he has with other and how they help him but he helps them and makes them change! I love Cissy here too!