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October 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 23
"Though he didn't say anything, Harry nodded and sat up, at least in a way. It was more of a sitting on his hip slightly so he didn't have to put his full weight on his bum."
Why can't they use a Lightening Charm to reduce at least some of the weight? I can't recall if that's a Canon charm but it's certainly prevalent in fanfics.
So...Albus intends to go about business as was usual in the First War, with gathering his Order around him and not telling them the important fact that Harry is a Horcrux. Or is he? I don't remember if they got rid of it in this story, or not. Either way, I think Dumbledore will be unpleasantly surprised by how many of his old minions will want nothing to do with him. Well, I hope that's the case anyway. ^_^
"Though he didn't say anything, Harry nodded and sat up, at least in a way. It was more of a sitting on his hip slightly so he didn't have to put his full weight on his bum."
Why can't they use a Lightening Charm to reduce at least some of the weight? I can't recall if that's a Canon charm but it's certainly prevalent in fanfics.
So...Albus intends to go about business as was usual in the First War, with gathering his Order around him and not telling them the important fact that Harry is a Horcrux. Or is he? I don't remember if they got rid of it in this story, or not. Either way, I think Dumbledore will be unpleasantly surprised by how many of his old minions will want nothing to do with him. Well, I hope that's the case anyway. ^_^
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October 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is it bad that I hope nobody will join with Dumbledore, Lily and James? It would be perfect if they found themselves out in the cold the same way they did to Harry. I'm surprised they just don't tell Harry what he needs to know then run away. That's what they are good at after all. Excellent new chapter! I really hope that someday soon Harry will feel good enough to make Dumbledore, Lily and James pay for what they did to him. Can't wait for more!
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October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update! Lily and James just don't understand, do they? Can't they realize after all that he has been through, the last people he wants support from are Lily, James and Albus. Personally, I hope that Voldemort takes care of them. Maybe that way they can pay for their sins against Harry. I can't believe that anyone is still loyal to Dumbledore? How could they be loyal to that coward? Lily, James and Dumbledore can make all the excuses they like for why they left, but in actual fact they just cared more for themselves than Harry. Now, they should have to pay for it! Thank you for your incredible update! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really love Narcisa here. She's great! On James, his wife and Albus, i think that now they will better understand what happened to Harry. Th ending of the chapter is great too because Harry asked for Remus.
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September 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a heartbreaking memory for Harry. After what he went through, I don't blame him for hating women and redheads. To see that horrid dog with Lily there must have made the flashback worse. I hope that watching what Harry went through during his flashback made it more real to Lily, James and Albus. I doubt, however, that they will accept any of the blame. Is it too much to hope for, after going through that, that Harry will sue them? I really hope he does something to make them suffer. Outstanding update! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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August 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! poor Harry! MORE SOON!!!
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August 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Looking forward to your next update!x
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August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 20
Oh boy. Here comes the big breakdown everyone has been fearing. Poor Harry! Actually, I feel sorry for all of Harry's family - yes, the Potters too - since they'll have to watch Harry going through all that without being able to help. Please tell me that Rita Skeeter isn't around to witness it!
One correction:
"'...I'm sure they will feel flailed alive before many on the panel are done with them....'
Oh boy. Here comes the big breakdown everyone has been fearing. Poor Harry! Actually, I feel sorry for all of Harry's family - yes, the Potters too - since they'll have to watch Harry going through all that without being able to help. Please tell me that Rita Skeeter isn't around to witness it!
One correction:
"'...I'm sure they will feel flailed alive before many on the panel are done with them....'
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August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 20
Oh boy. Here comes the big breakdown everyone has been fearing. Poor Harry! Actually, I feel sorry for all of Harry's family - yes, the Potters too - since they'll have to watch Harry going through all that without being able to help. Please tell me that Rita Skeeter isn't around to witness it!
One correction:
"'...I'm sure they will feel flailed alive before many on the panel are done with them....'
Oh boy. Here comes the big breakdown everyone has been fearing. Poor Harry! Actually, I feel sorry for all of Harry's family - yes, the Potters too - since they'll have to watch Harry going through all that without being able to help. Please tell me that Rita Skeeter isn't around to witness it!
One correction:
"'...I'm sure they will feel flailed alive before many on the panel are done with them....'
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August 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like Rufus here. He's great with Harry!
I don't think that the Potter and Albus understand exactly what happened to Harry and how it affects him. I continue to love this story!
I don't think that the Potter and Albus understand exactly what happened to Harry and how it affects him. I continue to love this story!