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for Lucky Strike

by SpeedyTomato

person staar
schedule December 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update !!!!! happy new year !!!!
person lizkrohn
schedule December 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Surely it is time to blindside AD with the knowledge that he is no longer a horcrux. The fact that harry had died and come back already. If all the horcruxes are found and destroyed then LV is already human or rather mortal as human he is not. maybe Draco talking about the scar etc in a confrontation with JP2 or JP and LP find out at the meeting with HP and the mindhealer even seeing the scar as HP confronts him with his life story.... all AD brilliant ideas out the window and he will have to deal with Rufus and Amelia.
person starr
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
so it has started again !!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!!
person autumngold
schedule November 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Incredible new chapter! I can't wait until Draco and the others get Potter to spill what is really going on. Does he know that Dumbledore expects his brother to die for the greater good? If he does, with the way he has treated Harry, he would probably be happy. With as rotten as James and Lily are, they probably wouldn't be too upset either. After all they abandoned him without another word or thought. Excellent update! Can't wait for more!
person autumngold
schedule September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Incredible update! I just really hope that Sirius is safe! On the same thought, I really wish that Dumbledore, James and Lily would be Voldemort's first victims. Thank you so much for your marvelous new chapter! I just wonder if Neville and Hermione realize they are helping the enemy by giving Jamie advice? Can't wait to see what will happen next!
person rigger42
schedule July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
My imagination about the dogs is pretty horrific. On the one hand I don't ever want to know, on the other, Harry needs to tell someone at some point, probably, in order to start getting past it. I'm kind of surprised they don't try to spend more time at the Malfoy residence, hoping to lure out the unicorns for more Harry-healing. Maybe it would be too much pushing?

Obviously the unicorns sense the curse scar -- is it a horcrux in this version or just dark residue? The Potters seem too emotional to be trying to get close to Harry just to manipulate him into dying, and while I could imagine Albus leaving out that part, I'm at a loss as to his argument for leaving him with Petunia and not retrieving him once they were safe enough for other children.

person mithrilandtj
schedule July 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Can't wait for more!
BTW you changed the Healer's name from Stuart to Stewart in the last chapter
person autumngold
schedule June 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Incredible new chapter! I am so glad that even James and Lily are realizing that their reasons for leaving Harry behind were stupid. Leaving a child on a doorstep with no protection was just stupid, and the fact that Lily and James let Dumbledore do it and never checked up on him makes them equally as guilty. They, and their family, will never suffer enough. I just hope that Draco doesn't start to like their daughter, she obviously never cared enough about her older brother to even send him a letter. Outstanding update to your wonderful story! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
person starr
schedule June 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
man can't wait for that meeting with the so called parents !!!!!!!!!!!!yes set Draco on him !!!!!!! Thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!!!
schedule June 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy to see that we're going to finally get some answers soon. I hope the next chapter has some pretty fireworks :-)