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for Lucky Strike

by SpeedyTomato

person Eve
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excited for what is to come with Lily and James' reappearence!! Update soon!
schedule August 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love the idea of introducing Harry to animals slowly and the ones you picked out were great. Especially the rabbit. *shakes her head* Ooh, I can think of a nice little group that are not going to be happy over this. I feel bad for Harry already! Meddling old man -.- Aren't they in for a shock when they find out what really happened to the poor boy.
person tabEkat
schedule August 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story twist there at the end. Somehow I doubt that the Potters and Dumbledore are going to be very welcome anywhere and most certainly not with Harry. Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule August 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is gonna be a good one certainly, I hope that he learns to trust someone in time.
person Eve
schedule August 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Such a good beginning, I never normally review on this site but had to in this case, finally a fiction that doesn't seem to be glorified porn! Cannot wait for the next chapter. Update soon!!!
schedule August 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yet another interesting idea and I can't wait to read more.