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for Lucky Strike

by SpeedyTomato

schedule September 27, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I love love love love your stories and cannot wait until you start updating again. Please keep me updated on any of your stories at Michaelle_Torchon@yahoo.com

person staar
schedule April 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

well shit hope they get there in time and get bella!!!!!!! thanks for the update glad to see you writing again !!!!!:):):)

person autumngold
schedule September 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Excellent new chapter! I find it pathetic that Dumbledore, after everything he has done to Harry, still expects him to fight in his war. He is just lucky that Harry has such a strong support system otherwise it would make sense for him to join Voldemort. It's sad that Harry won't be able to get any justice for what his parents and Dumbledore did to him. Even worse is that they are going to be able to live their lives happily in Britain as if they didn't throw Harry away like trash. Wonderful update! Can't wait to see what will happen next in your incredible story!
person staar
schedule September 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

good god is that oldman going to get his or what !!!!:):):) thanks for the update !

person staar
schedule March 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
hope all stays good with his sister !!!!! thanks for the update !!!!!!
person autumngold
schedule March 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your outstanding update to your wonderful story! I wonder what Harry's youngest sister will think when she finds out what her parents did to Harry? Will she forgive them and back them the way her older siblings have done? Hopefully she will be smarter and realize that her parents and Dumbledore are evil. Excellent new chapter! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
schedule March 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Dear SpeedyTomato I've noticed your love of the words adore and riot in your fanfics, and was wondering if it was a cute quirk of yours or an accidental habit?
schedule February 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Like it. Thank you for writing and sharing.
person autumngold
schedule January 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really, really hope that Harry is able to let Maggie know what jerks her parents are. Hopefully, by apologizing to him, she will learn what her parents did to her former brother. James, Lily and Albus are such jerks, it really bothers me that they are able to get a nice house. I really wish there was some way to get their loan rejected. Thank you for your incredible new chapter! I hope that your New Year is filled with love, happiness, health and safety!
person lusting_for_snape
schedule December 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter because it shows that Harry is healing and becoming more socialized for lack of a better word. He showed some compassion and empathy towards another and is considering forgiveness. Especially towards a female.