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Hmm, how about Harry/Fred/George? I like it when the twins are the dominant ones too ;-)

Talk about some strange pairings!! Read all of them to date just now and they were weird pairings...a couple were kind of good though...but all were interesting if only in a "I wonder what would happen if.." kind of way.

Awesome.

The Imperio angle was aa little icky for me (I'm really not into non-con of anykind), but the end sorta made up for it. lol

Thanks for taking the request. I Appreciate it.

Wouldn't mind seeing more if you're upto it, but its completely fine if you're not.

Thank you anyway.

as far as pairings go i would like lily/harry harry/collin harry/dennis harry/collin/dennis which are all very rarely used pairings. as far as scenes go.harry is pestered by collin in collins first year about wanting pictures of harry so harry decides to come up with an idea that he thinks collin will NEVER go for and that is 1 picture for 1 sex act such as a blow job or anal sex.


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collin and dennis decide to cheer harry up after his crappy yule tide dance date as well as give him a christmas present he will never forget which starts with them each giving him a good morning blow job and then harry fucks them both in the ass. an this idea could go on for at least two years without anyone caring since harry is always followed by collin and dennis no one would think twice about collin and or dennis following harry up to the dorms.anyone who did notice would just figure they were hoping to catch a glimps of harry in the shower an since all of 4th and 5th year harry was on the outs with most people then they would care less about it.




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dennis decides to take his and collin's harry watching to the next level by sneeking into harry's dorm while he is in the shower and then dennis decides 'i have gone this far may as well get a peek at him in the shower an if i am luck get to see him wank off' unknown to dennis harry has started placing wards up when he is undressed to prevent attacks from people like malfoy so harry knows he is being watched and by who so decides to give dennis something worth watching. an once dennis gets into daydreaming about harry harry then decides to make dennis dreams come true by fucking him hard and fast.




collin finds out that purebloods use muggleborns as sex toys and begs harry he will do ANYTHING for harry to protect him.



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you could also have harry get stuck with dennis in a sort of big brother type program at the school. an even thou he already has a big brother namely collin well collin does not happen to be in a high enough grade to count as a big brother. an of course it is big brothers job to each his little brother everything they need to know to properly fit into wizarding life, which means harry can try every single kinky thing he has ever dreamed about or read about in the porn books that make their rounds around the dorms, an of course if collins big brother has no problems with it harry can have his way with both creevey brothers. an of course if you make collins big brother someone like percy weasley then up tight weatherby could care less what collin does as long as he memorizes the school rules book and does not get detention. an as far as who was harry's big brother when he started you could make that oliver wood.



now personally i think the best way to pull off lily/harry story would be for james family to put their foot down when they find out that lily is with child. as a result lily is payed to go away and never return. she then takes the million galleons she is payed by the potters and sells it of as scrap gold on the muggle market so that it becomes 250 million pounds she then buys galleons with that getting 50 million galleons. she then leaves for america and sells the 50 million galleons in america as scrap gold and gets 12.5 billion american dollars which she turns into 2 billion galleons.an with that many galleons she can now buy her way into the upper crust of american wizarding sociaty. an of course they will figure she must be from a very old family seeing as they themselves only make about a million galleons a year so they will not think she found a way to get rich quick since none of they themselves have found it. so lily makes herself at home with the richest of the rich of america but still misses her james. so as harry grows up lily sees more and more of james in harry so much so she insists on calling him james and having him call her lily. she even has him sleep in her bed with her and come age 5 or 6 starts teaching him how to make her feel good starting with touching then moving on to oral sex, an by say age 7 or 8 or so he is having out right sex with her thanks to an enlarging charm on his cock. an since he is home schooled no one has a clue about their private home life and harry has no clue anything is wrong with this setup because it is the only one he has ever known. lily giving him baths and sucking his dick clean after and then him licking her pussy and then pounding her pussy raw then fucking her up the ass an then having her lick his dick clean of her own shit is just life as normal around the evens house. an at about age 18 or so she gives birth to their first child which the purebloods more or less think nothing about since they themselves marry other family members maybe not a mother/son often but as a result of forgetting to use birth control spells from time to time it does happen since it is a mothers job to make sure her son is properly trained to please his wife.



now there are other twists that could be used as well such as at 11 harry start at salem school for magic and lily gets a job there as a charms teacher. now of course everything to this point is as written above. an come harry's fourth year there the school goes to the tri-wizard tournament. now of course this is just so we can see how hogwarts is with james still alive and as a teacher at hogwarts and married to bella instead of lastrange. so lily can rub james nose in the fact she is now many times richer then the oh so rich potter family. an of course with no harry potter for voldimort to attack he attacks the longbottoms so bella is not in prison and her and james have several children together. an you could also have harry fall for collin and dennis while at hogwarts so that they then transfer to salem so it then becomes lily/harry/collin/dennis.



a third one would have lily survive the attack by voldimort by being knocked out when tommy boy blows open the door to the nursery. lily raises harry as listed above till he gets his hogwarts letter then she takes over the job as potions master at hogwarts as parts of the deal with dumbledore to get harry as a student. an come harry's second year collin creevey stumbles onto harry and lily having sex and is allowed to join in to keep his mouth shut and two years after that dennis joins the group so it ends up harry/lily/collin/dennis. an yes if you want you can have harry/collin/dennis with harry as top part of the time or all the time which is up to you.

now i think if you are going to do different chapters on different pairings that you label the chapter after those in the chapter that way it becomes easy to find the pairing you want most.

I really like how you build the chapters up and give details, but my only criticism is when it comes to the sex scenes it is almost non existent and seems like you've skipped over them

If I could make a request, it'd be a orgy of some sort, maybe at Grimmauld place where Harry steps in to find a large scale orgy taking place (Sirius, Tonks, Amelia, Dumbledore, Molly, Arthur, Fleur, Bill, The Twins, Ron, Hermione, etc).

Just an opinion.

What about a top!Harry Harry/Voldemort story? I'd really love to see more of those...