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September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So unbelievably cute!
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July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting. Not a concept that would have occurred to me, ever, but it just flows from your fingers. Er, keyboard. I liked it, especially Ginny's POV, that she felt shut out of Harry's life, could never be a part of it the way Ron and Hermione were. Although it's also obvious she has some growing up to do.
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July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! Sort of poetical seeming somehow.
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July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I quite liked this story- well I suppose that like is a bit of a loose word because I absolutely adored this little story!
The one thing that I really liked was how you had all the colours put into the story and described how each character was affected by said colour. Ginny was red because she was fiery and didn't understand why Harry chose his friends over her- Hermione was brown because she knew that her relationship with Harry would never cross into one of love but remain a friendship. I always associate green with jealousy, but how you described Draco and Harry's relationship with one another was quite marvelous!
Loved the way that you had Draco take note how Harry's eyes went wide when he was asked out.
Of course, I also love your OFC in this! How her relationship was white because she felt that Harry saved her or what I assumed was him saving her. After all she did lose her father... and stole a book.
Overall, I quite loved this story that you wrote and look forward to reading anymore from you!
The one thing that I really liked was how you had all the colours put into the story and described how each character was affected by said colour. Ginny was red because she was fiery and didn't understand why Harry chose his friends over her- Hermione was brown because she knew that her relationship with Harry would never cross into one of love but remain a friendship. I always associate green with jealousy, but how you described Draco and Harry's relationship with one another was quite marvelous!
Loved the way that you had Draco take note how Harry's eyes went wide when he was asked out.
Of course, I also love your OFC in this! How her relationship was white because she felt that Harry saved her or what I assumed was him saving her. After all she did lose her father... and stole a book.
Overall, I quite loved this story that you wrote and look forward to reading anymore from you!
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July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awww... I find this so sweet. I like the mini glimpses we see of Harry through the eyes of other people. The focus on how they see Harry's importance as it relates to THEM is unique. I quite like this.