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for Breaking the Habit

by KohakuShadow

person delia_cerrano
schedule April 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Even better than the first one. Can't wait to read the next one! Be nice if you wrote more...hint hint.
person BAFan
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well done. A worthy sequel to "Little White Lies." Thank goodness they've finally started being honest with each other. I liked that Snape took the initiative this time - or tried to, anyway. ^_^ Maybe next time? I like your writing style. It's descriptive without being flowery and there are very few errors, if any. (I think I noticed an "it's" when it should have been "its"), which is something to rejoice over these days.

Anyway, good job and I'm looking forward to the next installment.