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schedule August 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I sent a longer review for this story before but my computer froze and didn't send it -_- either way I love it and can't wait for the packs reaction to finding harry! Please don't take too long to update i'm on the edge of my seat for the next chapter :) Please let me know when it's up, my email is Charlie-becks@manx.net ty!
person TATIS
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi I die of want to read the next chapter.
I'd love to bite Tonks and become wolf.
Remus killed by idiot.
and turn to moody pureed
person tkykitty
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Amazing Chapter!!! So happy Harry and the babies have been found by their pack. Now they can hopefully get home with them. Well to a new home anyway. I'll miss the old forest and meadow you described. It truly was home for them. Stupid order members. :-P except sirus and remus. I like them. :-)
person Pernicia
schedule August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So, when was the decision made to make this longer than 4 chapters? I was all angsty over the end of the last chapter, thinking "This is it?! This is the end?! There's so much left, we didn't even get to meet the pups! Arghhh!" And other angsty angry things. Lol! So, beyond glad I now am caught up with the fact this is no longer a ficlet of 4 chappies. Anyway, awesome as always! Thanks mucho for another great addition to my lengthy favorites list!
schedule August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I love that Harry is loving the pack, of how he is feels about his 'role' in the war, and how he feels about everyone's judgments on werewolves; it means that Harry might not even consider leaving the pack when Dumbledore and the Order finds him~!

And, aw, poor Draco! I hope something happens that will free him of his fate. I think that on th off-chance of him being turned and joining Fenrir's pack, he would be...an omega bitch? I think that's what you said would be the lowest rank, or maybe it was just being an omega. I can't remember, but every time I think of Draco joining Fenrir's pack, I keep imagining that he would be the lowest rank in the pack.

And, I can't believe what those people are doing! It's like the Salem Witch trials, except instead of witches, it's werewolves that are being attacked!

And I am hating Tonks! In my big imagination, I am imagining Remus and Sirius tearing her a new one, and another scene of Fenrir or Harry telling her that Remus and Sirius are involved with each other (he can tell by scent); at least, I hope they are, I can't remember if you mentioned anything about it or not~!

I'm hoping that she isn't there when they do find Harry (the Order); although, my viscous side wants her to be there so she'll say how she truly feels and gets hated by Remus and Sirius.

I hope the pack accepts Harry when they find out who he is!! I can't bear to think of them hating him and throwing him out after the baby is born!

And, no! I hope that Harry is okay! I hope the baby is okay! I hope that the beta males are okay! *breathes heavily*
schedule August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! Harry's acting the way I wanted him to~!! I'm so glad that Harry isn't giving in, and that Fenrir finally found him!! I hate cliffhangers!! Please update soon!! I know you're busy with life and other stuff, but I'm at the edge of my seat!! :DDD
schedule August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesomenes!! Here is some awesomeness!!! Amazing story!! Keep it] going as amazing as you do!! Can
person dantae
schedule August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This wa an amazing update but I really need the next part. Please hurry!
person Kiyo
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love it!!
person Anya
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yesss, glad he found Harry. Great chapter! Anxious already for the next part!