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schedule October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love a catty Harry, hes absolutly amazing. hell if i had Fenrir id be flaunting it too.....i mean....hell....nevermind you get it. i really hope that they kill all the females, they're really pissing me off and im a female. Amazing chapter Star can't wait for more!
person Guest-Cause-I'm-too-Lazy-to-Sign-in
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awwww they have to escape!! Fenrir has to notice something then beat the shit out of Bernice then leave the females there while the pack leaves!!!!
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That bitch! I hope that nothing bad happens to Harry, the twins, the pack, and Fenrir!! Well, I wouldn't mind if those females got hurt. I want Bernice to live after the attack, so that Fenrir and Harry can torture her before killing her!! >:D

Looking forward to the next chapters~! :D
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh yaaay! Thank you :) made my day :) another awesome chapter. I can't believe it'll all be over soon :( I'll miss it heaps but I can't wait to see how you end it :)
person Luraji
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well my question got answered when you answered Khaleesi's. I'm really going to miss Stacey the most. Actually, I wish none of them died. :( Although, I can be content if those three females leave or die. Fenrir definitely needs to go back to an all male pack.
Thank you for another amazing chapter and I can't wait to see what happens in the next!
person angeljin
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that this chapter gave you so much trouble. :( I have to say, I really love how Harry beat the crap out of Emily. Now if only Fenrir or Harry had/would kill Bernice; I really hate her.
person Outlawgal
schedule September 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow I feel stupid I had no idea that you are writing Rise of the Drakons as well. No wonder I love this story so much. Man you are a good author to have me reading so many of your works. Keep up the awesome work and you have a excited and happy reader in me for as long as you write.
schedule September 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oooh feisty Harry! Love it when he's all jealous :) what an action packed chapter! I loved it!!! It's my birthday on the 28th, think I can get a special birthday chapter??? I love FenrirxHarry so much! And your story is one of my favourites I've reread it seven times already :D
person Luraji
schedule September 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Did you notice that you killed off all the members whose name started with an s? I think that was all of them anyway as I do have trouble keeping track of all their names! Its going to be worse now that there's more people!
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, not what I had in mind of bitches thinking they could replace Harry, but I like this better than the one I imagined~!! I hope those girls are thick headed, cause I want to see Harry tearing them a new one~!! :DD

And, why?!?! I love that they have someone to stay, but I'm sad that three of them died!! D':
I'm going to miss them!!

I really loved this chapter~!! Looking forward to the next one~!! :DDD