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October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*dance around in joy* this was so good I laughed I cried I yelled and then I cried some more but it was so good, only took me three hours to read
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October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hey star
Amazing chapter! Im so sad that this story is coming to a close, FenrirxHarry is one of my favorite pairings and not many people do stories for them and then my favorite author writes one, I was estatic! Ive been reading and following you since the life and trials of harry and draco, I love your work so much you are an amazing writer I only wish I could write like you do one day. I cant wait for rise of the drackens to start up again, ill be here cheering you on as you write it!
I do have one question though, I saw the review you left at the bottom of this last chapter of tribulation, and I was wondering when you said that harry doesn't have access to his money, wouldn't it be prudent, now that Sirius is back in harrys life that he would help him out some more? I would totally see Sirius as the type to be bringing harry all kinds of stuff to help them out in the wild, trying to take care of harry from afar. I know fenrir probably wouldn't stand for that but I could totally see Sirius doing that. But its just my thoughts on the matter! keep up the fantastic work I can wait for the next chapter and drackens to start up again!
with much love,
Christine
Amazing chapter! Im so sad that this story is coming to a close, FenrirxHarry is one of my favorite pairings and not many people do stories for them and then my favorite author writes one, I was estatic! Ive been reading and following you since the life and trials of harry and draco, I love your work so much you are an amazing writer I only wish I could write like you do one day. I cant wait for rise of the drackens to start up again, ill be here cheering you on as you write it!
I do have one question though, I saw the review you left at the bottom of this last chapter of tribulation, and I was wondering when you said that harry doesn't have access to his money, wouldn't it be prudent, now that Sirius is back in harrys life that he would help him out some more? I would totally see Sirius as the type to be bringing harry all kinds of stuff to help them out in the wild, trying to take care of harry from afar. I know fenrir probably wouldn't stand for that but I could totally see Sirius doing that. But its just my thoughts on the matter! keep up the fantastic work I can wait for the next chapter and drackens to start up again!
with much love,
Christine
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October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is an amasing story and i love this chapter. i had thought that this one was the last as t ended so well. looking forward to the net one. i love all your fics
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October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo! You killed Grant! ;_; you have legitimately made me cry in this chapter. I will miss Grant, more than any other character in this story. But the story is coming to an end, a happy one yes? So that's good. It also means more rise of the drackens! So I will wait and enjoy what's left. And as pre-emptive as this is, thank you for an amazing story! Its not easy to get me to cry over a story and you have achieved it, so again thank you.
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October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic soo much!! Looking forward to more rise of the drakens though XD
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October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I LOVED this chapter! you are an amazing writer star!! I can't even pick a favorite part because, it was all just that good!!!
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October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter! You did a great job on this story! I really like how you bring it all together in this chapter! Very well written!
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October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I, well, I really can not think of any other way to phrase this. I love you and your stories! Learning that you've updated a story is like a birthday present, Yule present, sleeping in, chocolate, and coffee all combined. And this chapter was like a triple-shot!
I'm so glad that those evil, conniving, little bitches are gone. And while I love Harry's new babies, Harry really needs to have a baby girl. It would so funny to have an all male pack trying to figure out how to raise a little girl.
I'm so glad that those evil, conniving, little bitches are gone. And while I love Harry's new babies, Harry really needs to have a baby girl. It would so funny to have an all male pack trying to figure out how to raise a little girl.
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October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You asked for epic reviews, so for the first time ever, I'm leaving a review on here cuz you deserve it!!!
First of all, chapter 10 was phenomenal! Long, but every detail was appreciated and in my opinion necessary!
The scene with the final battle was so emotionally charged, and I teared up (which I never do, reading) when the death toll was given. The emotions of the pack were conveyed to the point I felt empathetic toward them, like I could feel their pain.
The beating of Bernice was well written, but I think that one of my favorite parts of this entire chapter was the acceptance Harry showed and enforced toward Burne, and Burne's (undescribed but inferred) protection of the pups.
The descriptions of Fenrir's emotions in this chapter, and giving a smidge from his point of view, was also enlightening. The jealousy, the feelings when he wants to admit love, everything... While anyone who has read this fic to this point knows Fenrir loves Harry, seeing it written out that way is touching.
As for the four new little pups, my only question with them is are they werewolves... You mentioned they were a month old (so around or slightly past their first full moon) but didn't mention whether they had lycanthropy or not, and according to previous chapters they weren't guaranteed to have it.
That's my only question about the chapter, and other than that it's a well written, fantastic chapter where every question is answered that I could think of. Quite a tear jerker. Bravo!
First of all, chapter 10 was phenomenal! Long, but every detail was appreciated and in my opinion necessary!
The scene with the final battle was so emotionally charged, and I teared up (which I never do, reading) when the death toll was given. The emotions of the pack were conveyed to the point I felt empathetic toward them, like I could feel their pain.
The beating of Bernice was well written, but I think that one of my favorite parts of this entire chapter was the acceptance Harry showed and enforced toward Burne, and Burne's (undescribed but inferred) protection of the pups.
The descriptions of Fenrir's emotions in this chapter, and giving a smidge from his point of view, was also enlightening. The jealousy, the feelings when he wants to admit love, everything... While anyone who has read this fic to this point knows Fenrir loves Harry, seeing it written out that way is touching.
As for the four new little pups, my only question with them is are they werewolves... You mentioned they were a month old (so around or slightly past their first full moon) but didn't mention whether they had lycanthropy or not, and according to previous chapters they weren't guaranteed to have it.
That's my only question about the chapter, and other than that it's a well written, fantastic chapter where every question is answered that I could think of. Quite a tear jerker. Bravo!
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October 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved this chapter, especially the parts where Harry beats the shit out of those bitches. Though I hope he gets to have a go on Bernice, what she did to him needs payback, more so now that she betray them.
Please update chapter 10 soon.
Please update chapter 10 soon.