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schedule October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So amazing! I love a happy ending. A beautiful story with the right amount of angst and suspense and fluff. Absoloutely love this pairing and I'm glad you did them justice :D
person Celestit
schedule October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for this really great story!
I did enjoy each and every chapter.
You really have a great writing style, the characters have deep and everything just fit.
So once again:
Thank you really much for the many great hours of reading you did present us with!

Celestit
person TATIS
schedule October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love that.
I loved the whole fic.
I would love to know if Harry will have more babies.
I love children.
There are few more puppies happier I am.

I really congratulate you.
You write great
person Nene
schedule October 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story so much. I would love to see Sirius play with the five pups, only at their parents ok first.
person ChrisVags
schedule October 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
To Starlight Massacre,

I want to say I
schedule October 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Once again, you managed to be awesome and right a wonderful story, Star~!! I thought that this was the last chapter, but I'm glad that another one is coming soon, especially when it's taking place a couple years in the future~! Looking forward to it~! :D
schedule October 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Once again, you've managed to be awesome and write a wonderful story! I thought that this was going to be the last chapter, but I'm glad that another one is coming soon, especially when it's going to take place in the future~! Looking forward to it~! :D
person AC7
schedule October 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok this is my first review on this site, so hopefully it works, cos I'm not a member.
But OMG, where did all these new chapters appear? Spent half the night catching up, lol. But yeah you could say It was a monster of a chapter, but the whole story is a monster, at first I wasn't sure of the pairing but as I read further into the story, fell in love with them. This story as it's ups and downs, it made me laugh and cry and angry, but I was so glad when Voldemort died and Harry and kids all survived, but sad that half the pack died, (well except the 3 bitches, what they did to Harry and the relationship he has with his mate). I was a bit sad coming to the end of the last chapter thinking that was the end, but you surprise me with an extra chapter, I look forward to reading that too. Sorry I haven't taken the time to review before on any of your stuff, but never know what to say, as I feel like after reading something so epic that I feel like I'm lacking in my reviews, if I just say great story. But I'll try to in future.
I love when you post something, it always a nice surprise to see when you update, so take as long as you like, I'm not fussed on how long an author takes the write an update, but when a story goes unfinished that disappoints me, especially if it's well written and thought out.

I feel like I'm rambling now, so I'll shut up, again I look forward to the conclusion of this story whenever it appears.
Thanks :D

Ok hopefully this works,
ps sorry if this get posted multiply times.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yep, good chapter...nice and long to. Can't Sirius give Harry some money from the Black vaults or Kingsley arrange for the Potter vaults be turned to the minestry who makes a trust for Harry's "cousin" the last Potter??? Then they could buy land in transylvania or somewhere and build a life and have a few comforts like a huge house for the pack or an old castle. Hey if your going to have a creature story you might as well go for the perfect ending!
person darklady
schedule October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aww I wanted to cry when I read that Grant died. But life goes on. So happy that Harry's 3 newest babies were born without any problems. And wow what an amazingly long chapter :) Can't wait till the last one. And then back to ROTD! Yay!