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i really loved this fic Star

Just finished reading it & thought it was great!! Going to read more!

fantastic story but it would have been nice if Harry could access his account to improve the lives of his pack especially in winter.

I absolutely loved it. If I ever figure out how to use the favorite option it'd definitely going on there. For now it's bookmarked. The plot and the way you write is great.

Harry still as the tracking charm on him and probably the cubs. Surely a pack of werewolf wizards would think of that now they know who he is !

The most interesting fick with this paring i read in a looooooooooong time. Just delicious.

Hey, really enjoyed this one. Like how you had Fenrir transforming slowly and the way you portrayed the different layers of grey that a persona can have. Wasn't a fan of the Bad! Moody and Tonks chapter. I always like both of them and to have them ripped limb from limb for doing what they thought best is a bit much. Yes, they shouldn't have been rough with Harry but death? Really? and Harrys reaction wasn't even that shocked . More like "eh...moving on" but I guess that fits with his new personality(?) I certainly enjoyed this fic more then the Dracken one you a writing and I appreciated the fact that years later at 21 Harry (only)has 6 children, compared to teh Dracken fic in which he is what 25...and he has 18 children( according to the latest scaled bits which I browsed through). GOOD GRIEF, I honestly don't know anybody, woman, man or anything in between that would want to have 18 children by the time they are in their mid twentys. I'm 26 myself and I just really couldn't identify with that bit( I mean all the babies) which is why I stopped reading. I feel like this fic also really covered more of the annoying bits about having children instead of just glossing over them, how they are always getting into everything and the fact that they are always THERE.Unlike the Harry of "drackens" who in my own opinion (after birthing 6 children by the tender age of 17 ) is more of a glorified baby machine, the Harry here is more animal, he exists largely like a wolf with Fenrir and the Pack which is another reason I don't feel annoyance at the large amount of babies. He is following his natural urge after all and living apart from everything else and CHOOSING to stay there seems so different from being forced to go through heat after heat, carrying baby after baby in a shear endless cycle.Plus his mates actually don't work . They hunt but I feel like this Harry somehow has more freedom. I was wondering if the kids were going to go to Hogwarts though? Who teaches them to read and such or is that not important?

Ah, what I mean with his mates don't work is that his pack mates don't have jobs that they have to go to :)

It was good Kinda Sad its over but loved it all the more for it

Omg loved it!!!!! I was so sad when all my fav characters died but I'm glad that Harry is finally happy! :) hopefully, there will be updates soon since hArry has yet to have a girl. ;) maybe she should be named Stacy? :) anyway, thanks again!!!!