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person Katja
schedule August 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story! It's definitely one of the best Harry/Fenrir stories out there. Sweet Pup here in AFF is good too, but it's been so long since it got a new chapter... It's good to see Fenrir getting a better deal this time around, I can't imagine Harry leaving his pup(s) for any reason what-so-ever, even if there were other packmembers minding them. A good chapter, quite quickly at that, many thanks! I at least eagerly wait for more when you have the chance.
person Dreamer27
schedule August 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story. It's great I love it. I really like Fenrir/Harry pairings but their don't seem to be a lot around. I love the pack and how you have written about all the different interactions, like the head rubbing and showing the belly, as it makes it more realistic. I can't wait til Sirius and Remus find them, but I hope only they do and decide to join the pack. I mean Remus is a werewolf and needs a pack and it was Fenrir who turned him and Sirius is a fugitive on the run and his only family are Harry and Remus, so I think he should also join the pack also having fun with the beta's might help him get over his time in azkaban. Also on the full moon he can turn in to padfoot and as he can control his actions and remember what happens, he can help keep the pack safe by helping them to avoid dangers, that their not aware of in their wolf form.

Any way I just wanted to say I love this story and can't wait til the next chapter, your a great writer and I can't wait to see the reaction Fenrir and the pack will have to him being Harry Potter and for Harry to have pups. It will be more than one pup right as he's a werewolf?
person Mercurial Mermaid
schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story, and the pack dynamics are interesting. However, there are no wolves left in the wild in Britain. Unless you're counting animals escaped from zoos or something, the largest predator in the British wilderness is the badger. I get suspension of disbelief and all (the story IS about werewolves and includes mpreg, after all) but I thought I'd mention it in case you were unaware.
person dead-angels-command
schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*screech* :3:3:3:3:3
person angeljin
schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! I'm so happy that you're writing a Harry/Fenrir story. There aren't nearly enough of them.
schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter!! I'm looking forward to the pregnancy and the babies~!! Will Harry be pregnant with only one baby or more than one? I hope it's just one, he's too thin to be carrying more!! Unless he puts on weight while pregnant, then I'm all up for Harry being pregnant with more than one baby~!! :DDD

And I hope that when they do find Harry, he doesn't go with them!! I hope he finds out about Fenrir before they tell him the prejudice version of what he did! *crosses fingers*

Looking forward to the next chapter~! :D
person Mako
schedule July 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg Iove this story!! Please update soon!!
schedule July 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM

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person HEARTSTAR
schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting more please when you can thank you
person Dedicated Reader
schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I love this fanfic! I started to read your fanfictions because of Rise of the Drackens (I have to admit I nearly never review D: But avidly read each and every chapter of your stories!) and each new fanfictions just makes me happy :)
Your writing style is really good and I just wanted to say to you: Great work! Take your time and don't stress over fanfictions and have as much fun as you can!
Thank you for your great stories!