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for Kumiho Adjule

by SomethingElse

person n
schedule March 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapter but now I'm worried about Severus, Sirius and especially the unborn pups. Hope they are not in any kind of danger and it will all pass quickly without any repercussions.
As for your question - I am drawing a blank at the moment but I'll give it some more thought till next time and see if I can figure it out.
person ChaosLady
schedule March 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus and Sirius!
person n
schedule October 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love the dynamic between Sirius and Pansy, how comfortable and relaxed they are around each other. It's a type of relationship which neither of them really got to experience growing up so it's great to see them like that.
As for Severus and Sirius' disagreement, it was not right of Severus to spring a big change in the way they play together on Sirius like that out of the blue and then try to "browbeat" him into agreeing and Severus kind of knows that too. There is nothing wrong with wanting to incorporate something new and wanting your partner to at least consider trying it, but there needs to be an actual discussion beforehand, especially when it comes to BDSM play. I appreciate that you didn't just make Sirius roll over and agree while being in the submissive position. Apart from the fact that both are flexible when it comes to being a dom or sub, assuming a submissive position and being prepared to give up control in certain situations doesn't mean that you're a doormat or anything like that and I'm glad that you showed that.
Barney, the bat is too cute - will Roger Davies take him when he is completely recovered as bats are useful for Vampires?
person n
schedule July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter.
It was interesting to find out more about the Kumiho hierarchy.
I also adore the fact that Beakie got himself a mate and is having 3 young with her.
person Minervaq
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You have made me a Sirius/Severus shipper. I have no suggestions at the moment but I can't wait for the next chapter
person Sailor Sol
schedule July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just finished the first chapter. Very well done, without overdoing it. I'm looking forward to the next one. As for training suggestions, how about a bit of 'control' training? You know, you can't come until I say so.
person ChaosLady
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!