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for Dawn of the Drow

by SomethingElse

person n
schedule March 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Kenzei and his schemes and machinations are kind of intriguing because he seems rather unconcerned about the possibility that people are going to find out about his involvement at some point (two Drow princes going missing is bound to attract attention at some stage), especially with him using lackeys that have been seen to hang around with him.
Anyway, the only downside to it is Chris getting hurt and the two male Au Weras nearly collapsing.
I am also getting slightly worried about the, more than likely, future encounter with the Stone Dragon.
As for your story ideas, outlines 5 & 6 sound interesting.
person Anonymous
schedule October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope there are no dragons IN the shells, as that would seem antithetical to Charlie's profession.
person n
schedule October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I feel you with the school being demanding bit.

Back to the story. "Keep dragon egg safe" coupled with Chris' nausea - does that mean that he is already pregnant? That would throw a little spanner in the works.
Hope Charlie sending his presents won't tip the bad guys off that he is not actually in "Bulgaria" in case they went looking.
I always enjoy your updates, even if they don't come every week and take longer to be published. They are usually worth it.
person n
schedule July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed the chapter, glad you updated.

Wonder who Charlie will pick as the other three suitors...
Btw, Zuri is adorable.
person Minervaq
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. I am really happy that you have sequels or offshoots to Chameleons Song. I also feel terrible that it has taken me so long to get to reading again but I was in a horrible rut with School and family issues.
person Jan
schedule July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOL, love Umballa, she's a really smart dragon ^_^ please update chapter 2 soon.
person Jordan C
schedule July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok that was an amazing start to a story and a will await the next chapter.
person Sailor Sol
schedule July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God, this one I LOVE! 'Not worth your time!' Amazing! Absolutely amazing! This, my dear, has the potential to be not only an OUTSTANDING fanfic among the very good ones, but it's one of the few I think has draconic attitudes down to a T! Kudos, dear, and I really can't wait for more!