rate_review Reviews

I like it so far!! It's an interesting idea. Keep it going!

First and foremost! Definitely start a discussion forum! All i can say is that this is an incredibly interesting story with truely unique premises and I want to talk about it haha.

So... OC Anthony. Care of Magical Creatures teacher. I like it. A LOT. I swear I can almost envision some sexy man with a stetson wrangling horses and getting all sweaty. It's a dream come true, and I can just imagine his deep sexy voice going "Rose" as she passes him by lol.

Rose is hilarious haha "oh i just revealed my age lol" she's so charmingly dramatic I love it!
Aw that poor Amelia, I'm glad Rose saved her before Stuart could take advantage of her! I'm kinda finding that i'm liking your OC's. Like as I was reading it, I could envision everything clearly and kinda wished this place existed!

But i did want to ask, both Lucius and Narcissa got the dementors kiss?? Lucius I understand? I mean I'm willing to wait to learn about Draco and his past. But Narcissa saved the savior of everyone. Did she have more crimes we didn't know about or was that orchestrated by Draco?

Ah also, i'm really interested on what Transported them both to Texas. I see what you mean about the voice of the characters. Draco's development is going to be interesting! But hopefully Hermiones inqusitive mind will keep her in Texas long enough to figure out what the heck is going on!

I think you've got a good start and I am intrigued. :-) I look forward to his back story, as (if you're going with canon) he didn't turn to the Light side and has everyone fooled. Hmmm Chance to start over completely or hiding? Plus, what happened to Hermione? Is she in danger? Your readers want to know! I like the new characters, too! Thank you, HG4eva

Love it! So many ideas are often recycled. I like that yours is much more original and is very well written . I can't wait to read more and find out what happens.

Oh yes:) This is gonna be so interesting! I can't wait for more.

Rather curious to see where you'll take this. I for one would love for you to continue. Don't worry about the OCs; they don't have to be incredibly developed as it tends to slow the plot.

Great story!

Great start. I can't wait to see what you have in mind.