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This story is fast-paced and full of mystery. It keeps getting better and better.

I will admit to having originally having reservations about this fic. You have completely won me over. I can not wait for the next chapter!!

oh thank goodness it wasn't really Justin. Even though we know so little about him I was hoping it wasn't in his MO to change so much as to atack a school. Not to mention I believe he was half or muggleborn so sirens wouldn't have surprised him so; not really up to checking atm.
So sad about Mr. Greene and the students.

Loved their kiss. Is Draco really not going to talk about it? For shame, Draco.
I wonder what it is Hermione wants to speak with Draco about before telling the Aurors?

Thanks for writing.

Aw:) This chapter gave me this lovely warm feeling. I especially liked Draco's outburst about not washing his hands. That kind of talk would have made me want to kiss him!!

I'm glad he was able to save her, he seems so concerned about her and his friends at the school. This Draco is so genuine that I'm like gushing all over him. But damn you Justin! ever hear of jurisdiction!! You can't have my Draco!!
Speaking of which! Who's the A-hole throwing purple spells at Hermione!
I'm thinking i know who it is, but I'm not sure if i'm allowed to say it here.
As river song would say from Doctor Who... "Spoilers"

I can't wait for Chapter 5 :)

Fascinating story concept. I look forward to learning your Draco's story.

Thanks for writing.

Cicadas.... Grrr. they are like my natural born enemy lol! We have a swarm of them in the place I live lol. But if you knew where that was you would understand how unusual that is! GRRRR. Lol

Reading about Luis' BBQ really REALLY makes me want some. I want to have access to a mission like that, and get to eat at a buffet that's homemade food everyday. I kinda want to take a vacation and live this life lol! Horseback into town, pumpkin bread by Rose and a real life Cowboy like Anthony to keep me entertained! I've NEVER seen a real cowboy lol!

But Anthony... Yummy haha I'll explain my thoughts on him elsewhere lol!

I'm glad the contract between Draco and Mr. Green was discussed. I was wondering how a boss could force an employee to take someone shopping lol. But i suppose Draco is indebted to him for giving him a job. You've peaked my interest once again with Draco and his England life, since we know Blaise is taking care of his finances, he could transfer the majority of his money over to Texas and start over there(since he has nothing back in England). But he hasn't yet so it makes me wonder if it will pave the way for his possible return home with Hermione.

Although it also made me wonder if Hermione might stay there with him ultimately considering, she's grown apart from Ron and Harry. This was a very interesting chapter and gave me A Lot of food for thought.

I like that despite Draco's apparently kind nature he still has his spark. I love it when he gets all sarcastic on Hermione and shuts her down. I think the combination of her assuming too much and Draco being able to stall her immediately will help speed along their reconciliation. I mean if he were a Draco that just argued with her, he wouldn't change her opinion of him. But these two characters seem to mesh really well.

I can't wait for Chapter 4! I want to know what happens next! Will Hermione and Draco be forced to sex it out in order to win their freedom if they are captured ;}
J/K
Eris:)

This is a really interesting read so far. I wonder what will happen next, and why the headmaster wanted the both of them to be in that place. He seems very shady.

On a completely separate note, a freaky coincidence happened when I read the word 'cicada'. It was at that exact moment that the cicadas started singing outside of my place. So very, very weird!!!! I was like "wow, magical sound effects". :D

Interesting... He's still cold, aloof and keeping up a mask, but somehow has convinced the people he works with that he's a "tragically misunderstood" person. Hmmm Also interesting that he ended up there the same way as Hermione, but chose to stay. I look forward to more really soon!! HG4eva

This story is such an interesting change of pace. I have only encountered a couple of stories that deal with other wizard schools. You're creating a fascinating setting. You have the beginnings of a wonderful mystery and, I hope, a fine romance, too.

This is great so far! But Lincoln wasn't the first US president...