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I'm really enjoying your story. It's an interesting idea. I just happened across the first nine chapters and will have my eye out for the rest. I don't usually review but you said you only had two, so...

This story continues to be a delight. It makes sense that Hermione would enjoy the anonymity of being away from the constant attention of the wizard community in England, but also makes sense that she would miss her friends if she stays there. Having Harry show up may make her choice to stay more difficult. I'm curious, if Draco bore no lingering ill will for Hermione, why would he show disdain for Harry? Or is it mostly a jealous reaction to Hermione kissing Harry on the cheek?

This is a fantastic story. I started reading last night and could not stop reading. I love all of the new characters (Anthony sound delicious and so does Lt Benjamin Ptyalin). I'm blaming my sleep deprivation on your wonderful writing skills.

I find Draco's and Hermione's slow progression into a relationship beautiful. Their pace is realistic and full of sexy tension. Whenever they do get together its going to be soo good! One thing though, Hermione is very secure in acknowledging her submissive side. She mentioned her first experiences with 'Sir' and how good that arrangement was for her. Is she going to ask Draco if he has any preferences or kinks in a sexual/intimate relationship? Or does she just know Draco has it in him to be a Dom? He does not seem to like bragging at all (and I like that about him).

Why is the world is Draco have so much disdain for Harry still? Is it the same problem he had with Hermione when she first got to the Mission?

Oh my heart just dropped...
GAHHH PLOT TWIST
I love Harry. I mean LOVE Harry but his sudden appearance in your fiction not so much lol! If too many people invade this cozy little world that Hermione and Draco have then she'll be more likely to go back home.
I was so freaking happy for them too ugh . "Star crossed lovers" exactly! I was loving the whole "let's give this a shot" conversation. It was very realistic and I could almost picture it.
BTW Luis working out... oh yea Hermione haha. I love that she still finds Anthony (YAY He's back!) and Luis attractive. I feel like any woman would and so i love that she's having those reactions.

Rose and her "Draconis" had me laughing, I loved that entire exchange between them. It was very playful however I'm glad Hermione told her to shut up when she was over reacting about the kiss lol. I was feeling the same way like Primrose do not make this awkward for them! All the UST is already killing me!!!

PLEASE Let this be a happy ending lol. Please let Harry be reasonable although from the sound of Draco's voice... I'm guessing not lol.
I mean maybe Draco is still carrying resentment that is unnecessary but I'm on his side all the way in this lol!

Another great chapter. Quite literally dying for the next so that I can see what happens!

Eris

So I'm not gonna lie, I'm one of the more invested kind of readers and so when Draco was like "Oh, my dear, the things I would give to you". I nearly and very shamelessly creamed myself. Not in a gross actual way but in a That's too fucking hot to handle way.

My heart breaks over my cowboy lol... but with all the sexy deliciousness going on I think i'll survive. I like that your Hermione can be honest with her attraction to Draco. It makes every scenario that much sexier because the possibility of something happening is that much more poignant.

But then... right as I was getting into the super sexiness and Hermione was on the bed... BAM there comes Rowle.... You evil evil woman! *shakes fist*
But I'm glad Anthony was still alive, I've been wondering that they entire time. I mean in order to have a constant supply of polyjuice he needed to be alive but hey you never know.

But oh hot damn your ending for this chapter?? Three some!?? Super sweaty sex with the cowboy and Draco... lol well Hermione said it best "A girl can dream" ;}

I love this work sincerely and whole heartedly! I'm waiting with baited breath for the next installment!
Eris:)

I'm sorry this is the first time I'm reply Im just not used to this site oter than to actually read stories haha

Actually this is the first ever review I've written on this site :)

I just wanted to say this is amazing! I absulotely love the storyline it's so original and keeps me wondering what could possibly be next.

Cannot wait to learn more :)

~gracie

I love this story more with each chapter! Suspenseful, sizzling, and such an unusual setting for HP fanfiction. Fascinating at every turn. Please give us lots more soon.

Oh yes, I really love the whole "we're dating" thing as a ruse. It plays a two fold cover story and excuse for our protagonists to express how they feel openly. I really like the moments when they are discussing something and then they slip into romance mode just for the sake of characters like Anthony. Granted they don't know who is who, or if it's even safe but still it's a sweet thing you've got going on there.

I really like Primrose and Luis, I can't express why the OC's are catching me so much in this one, but I'm finding myself completely insatiable for more interactions with them.
Except my heart is breaking lol... what's up with Anthony's "strange grin" sounds pretty nefarious to me...
Oh my sweet cowboy! Lol and Draco's brief frown... I'm pretty sure Draco has had enough encounters with Anthony to know something was up. But at the same time, why would a bad guy that is trying to use stealth and disguises be sulking openly even if his plan didn't work. It seems like an amateur move on his part if he's Rowle...
Oh well He deserves to be caught!

I really liked the flow of this chapter and the little interactions between Hermione and Draco. Reading your fictions are such a nice reprieve from writing them lol.
Please update soon and let me return to your amazing world in Texas!

Eris

curious as to who Rowle is now. I like that Draco seems a little twitterpated.

So I was reading this pretty enthusiastically and when it got to the kiss i nearly dropped my phone and quite literally went "ohhhh snap" lol. I as not expecting that but I loved it haha!! That is just my style kissing the girl to "cover up" their convo lol!

Also, because the chapter was of course awesome, "Ward of the Headmaster" basically means sex slave to me!! So bring on my sexy Dom Healer Draco who makes her bed to his will! Lol granted i know that's improbable but it still excites me lol!!


Good luck moving! I look forward to the next update!