rate_review Reviews

Awesome chapter. Very hot.

One issue: when Draco says towards the beginning,

"You're like a goddess in the firelight, how is a guy supposed to compete with that?" Yup that is my favorite line of any fan fiction I've read ever. I LOVED LOVED LOVED all of that and have re-read this chapter thrice now, hence the late review.
I can't even handle this Draco, I was like "Yes Sir" every time he asked a question...

Fuck a plot lol, fuck putting effort into anything else but more of that lol, I NEED more of that!

Lol but no, i love the plot as well, I just love good Dramione pairings!

:} Eris

Sizzling, steamy, hot chapter. Not what I expected for their first time, but I think Draco wanted to be sure to impress her after hearing about her earlier explorations with "Sir". You asked about continuations of this story. Yes! I'd absolutely love to read more. Heck, you've created a whole wizard school. Why not spin some more stories around it. It's a brilliant setting and you write so well. I'll read anything of yours, no matter what.

Oh, I am addicted to this story now! I keep refreshing it on my computer hoping it will be updated and today it was! I am like Eris, I am reading her story (MMIC) and yours at the same time and if you two could update more often I would be a happy girl. I finally registered just because of you two, after years, so you two must be something special. I'm really enjoying the originality of your story and can't wait to see where it goes. Please don't end it too soon!

Wow....I think that chapter may have started a small forest fire behind my house! If taking a few extra days to handle RL get us a scene like that feel free to take as much time as you need for the remainder of the story (which I'm begging to be several dozen more chapters long).

RL gets the best of everyone it seems. The last chapter I failed to review as I planned. I was so surprised by Harry's supreme animosity toward Draco. I understood it in a way, Hermione had a similar response to see Draco again. But Harry had to have been briefed on the situation with Hermione while waiting to approval to travel. He acted as though he didn't care that Draco protected both Hermione and a school full of students and teachers. He really treated Hermione like she was a 16 year old who was clueless how the world works. And to blast her prior relationship to Draco like that...whoa that was crudely move. I was so happy when Hermione aired Harry's dirty laundry too. Just a reminder that we all are humans and he was no saint either (ok, that really sound lame to me so just forget what you just read).

Draco handled the situation with maturity and dignity. He proved in that one conversation just how much he has grown as an individual and a man. A lesser man could have taken the information aired before him and caused far more damage.

Now back to Hermione and Draco's 1st date. It was absolutely perfect. The environment was ideal for both of them to feel at ease. Neither one seems tense or anxious. I love Hermione's bouts of jealousy. She certainly has a nasty glare. And Draco seems to be a very observant man. Is that a good Dom treat or is that just Draco's natural given all that he has lived through?

I do hope you continue this story as there are still several question left open like, how in the world did a 15 year kid like Rowle get so powerful, was he acting alone,what is going on with Draco's business interest back in the UK, is Hermione going to teach at the Mission or act as assistant to the other professors, why the blatant disrespect from Al, the Potions Master and Landon, the DADA Professor? You do NOT have to answer any of these questions at all. I can wait for more to come, I was just letting you know that we are paying attention and adore what you have written.

Oh your Draco is just delicious! Just wanna smack him. And while I love a random fic with plotless smut, I know this story isn't like that. I'm interested to see where this story will go. I was excited to see your reply. As a Christian, I always find that to be such a sticky topic. Some authors go there and it usually has a bleak ending. Most stear clear of it so I can't blame you for doing so. So much hassle...
Loved Draco and Hermione's insecurities, albeit strangely misplaced and nonsensical it is still adorable. I mean honestly, Draco knows he is a sexy fuck and Hermione...well.. I suppose she could have a bit of insecurity issues. After Ron and Sir(who sounds like yet another hot sexy fuck).
Real life, that whore's a kicker. You'll pull through. Just one day at a time.
Wow...lol should've just typed "insert cheesy inspirational scentence here". Ignore that previous line...

Another good chapter. The only thing that didn't ring true was Harry would revealing a very private aspect of Hermione's sexual history in front of Draco. But, Harry is a bit of an impulsive guy so maybe I can accept that it just slipped out. Still, seems like a topic he'd have kept between just the two of them in a private yet tense discussion -- maybe a conversation that Draco could have overheard accidentally so his awareness of Hermione's experimentation with dominance and submission became part of the story in that way. Oh, well. Not a big thing in a generally excellent story.
Such a disappointment that their steamy scene got interrupted. Looking forward to that continuing.

Oh you are dragging this out!
Loving the story so far. I've got a feeling that this isn't the last we've heard of out little neo-deatheater. Very concerned for this school and interested in the aspect of them having a priest on site. I know that is a sensitive topic potterwise and I'm kinda interested in how it would affect the students who are wizards and Christians. But since its all fictional, what the hay.
Harry on the scene always excites me, a good old fight between Draco and Harry over Hermione is just gold. Can't wait for more. These characters are delightful! So full of personality and passion!

So i immediately got excited once I saw the title was "control". Sexy Dom Healer Draco FTW!

The whole "she's to come with me" reminded me of the ultimate pissing contest. If Draco is a Dom, wouldn't he not like some other man especially Harry trying to take what's his? But Harry's clear prejudice (As well as Draco's) Ten years later makes me shake my head lol, what did he fight a war for? Kudos to Hermione for sticking up for herself!

But AHHHHH Hermione is a sub! I like that! That was quite literally the best way to introduce the BDSM aspect into this. I bet you Draco was like "Praise Merlin" when he heard that ;)

But AWWW Draco being the voice of reason was NOT what i was expecting! Maybe he was in such an awesome mood because hearing about Hermione's past made him so damn happy he couldn't possibly think of arguing with Harry lol:)

But Harry is rather damn agressive isn't he...?? Gripping her arm tight and demanding answers... Bah Humbug! Go back to England! I was just liking him again too until Draco left them alone. But ultimately I was glad for Draco's explaination, it made Harry think twice about how he was treating him.

But all of that aside... here i am reading minding my own business when BAM Draco goes "

Keep up the great work. I love it!