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Okay I'm a seriously devoted! Almost exclusively Dramione 'ship' reader, but I'm such a fan of yours, that I took a chance on this one, despite being more than a little grossed/creeped out by the concept, of Hermione, being paired with someone so old, that he actually went to school with her best friends parents!!! But in truth, I'm glad I did, give this one a chance, because it was really honest, and well derived, and genuinely sincere! There was a sweetness to it, that I didn't expect to find? And more than a bit of humor, that lessened the awkwardness if the situation, which I was not ignorant of, its being the most likely realistic way that things would have played out, if the situation had actually occurred in 'canon' under similar circumstances?! That's one of the things, that I think I enjoyed the most about this fic? It seemed to me, that you kept the everyone so well in character, I couldn't help but find myself easily propelled toward the coming chapters! I really thoroughly enjoyed it! So thank you for sharing it with us

Ch. 1-8

I just started reading this and I think I'm hooked. :-) It's different from other Marriage Law fics I've read in that it takes place before Voldemort's death and the law has been orchestrated by him. Very interesting!

Ch. 15

Ooh, I wonder how many reviews you'll get accusing you of being evil for leaving us hanging like that? ;-) Beautiful wedding, can't wait to read what comes next!

*Fans self*

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, MORE!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE~! Please, please, please!!!!!!

More! More! More!... Sorry. I like this story and can't wait for the next update. Job well done.

Love it and hope to see more.

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More story! Please! I want to see where it goes!

I love it, I love it, I love it. Please update SOOOOON. Please make the chapters longer, I've never read a SB/HG story before.....AHH....hurry!