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Great story! I really like it, however, just a few things I'd like to understand. I know its Harry/Snape centric but it seems you put Remus in prison and just forgot about him. There was bare mention of him in this chapter. And Harry or Sirius doesn't seem bothered in the least that Remus is spending a life sentence in prison. If not Harry, I would at least expect some kind of reaction from Sirius. Also, what about Cedric? You mentioned a few chapters ago that he was arrested. I saw no mention of him after that or maybe I missed it? Is he in prison or did he get released? Harry wouldn't be the type of person to just let that go.

That's it. :) Not a flame, just some things I didn't quite understand. Hope you update soon. :)

Btw, I'm really sad they're on a 'break'. Hope they patch up soon!

Yes! An update. *happy shuffle, as it's hard to dance while sitting on a bed*
I can't believe it took me so long to check for a update. I love the new chapter, I see Snape is being he usual welcoming self ;)
The blow up between Sirius and Molly was EPIC. I wonder if things will eventually cool of and they'll return. I have to admit part of me questions how readily Harry agreed to Sirius's request of being separated from Snape for a year - but then he did say he would support Harry no matter his decision so there is that... Also I understand about Harry wanting to be normal for a while before properly settling down with Snape (if he decides to). A jealous Snape is something I'm look forward to *laughs gleefully*
I hope my rambling made some sense, thanks for the update.

It's Mother's Day tomorrow so in the words of Rove McManus "Say hi to your mum for me". ^_^

good god your giving Harry other boy/girlfriends !!!! I wonder how that going to go with Snape, don't hurt him that much ok !!!!!! he has been hurt enough and Harry and him should be together hope this wakes Snape up and fast !!!!! Thanks for the update !!! :):)

i want to see a jealous harry as well as a snape. harry says he cares but some overwhelming jealousy on harrys part could really cement his true feelings. he seems far to flighty throughout this story and i think he really needs that wake up call as well.

thank you for the chapter, I liked it.

I'll be glad of a little jealousy if Harry realizes Sev is jealous cause he cares. But not too much...I can't stand the pain of their separation as it is. Yes I know You're a good writer and it's fiction but I really get into it and I WANT THEM TO KNOW HOW THEY FEEL AND STAY TOGETHER! Not a year of misery and stress... Please...pretty please. By the way I liked that you threw Molly out for being mean and judgemental to Sirius and in effect Harry.

I really, really love this story. It just keeps getting better with each chapter! I think you made a wonderful work re-telling Year 4 to fit the plot, and I'm anxious to see what awaits us in Year 5 with nasty Umbridge now at Hogwarts. But, most of all, I like how you're spinning Harry and Snape's relationship. You haven't shied away from the fact that there is a tremendous age-difference between them, or from the fact that Harry is not only Snape's junior but also still a fifteen-year-old boy (and previously, a fourteenth), and have still developed their relationship in a sensible, plausible way.

Eagerly looking forward to future chapters!

I still dont understand 'nagging' but i have an idea...

I dont have much time to read hp stories right now, but each two months or si i stay one day at home and your story is always in the first two to be checked!!!

Please dont stop writing, i really really want to see

So I have read all 25 current chapters and can't help but wonder...... is there more for this story cooking in your head?

Hello!
I just wanted to tell you how incredibly amazing I consider your story
I will be looking forward for more updates :)