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for A Marriage of Convenience

by NinaSweets

person moodysavage
schedule August 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Darnit... Snape still doesn't know about Harry and the blood quill. He's going to go ballistic... and then he's going to feel horrible... worse than horrible since he sent Harry there for his detentions too so he caused Harry to be tortured even more. Snape being mad has made him less observant... though he does deserve to be mad. I totally like that Cedric's kisses are not up to par with Snape's and I loved that Harry compared the two the way he did :)
schedule August 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Now we're getting to the crux of the matter; Harry's desire to live, but at what cost? Snape didn't mention Harry's hand after his detention with Umbridge. Did he notice? Will he move against her of behalf of his estranged husband?
Exciting chapter, Harry's growing up beginning to think for himself.
person starr
schedule August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I know your on vacation and all but with all Snape saw in Harry's mind he didn't see what pig face is doing to him !!!!!!! Well I said it and Thanks for the update !!!!!
person Lumcer
schedule July 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I kept passing this story over, not sure if it was what I was looking for. I'm so glad I didn't skip it over this time! I loved practically every second of it! I hope there is more to come! I'll be checking in!

KCK-Lumcer
schedule July 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!

Ahaha, I tried to get ahold of my Mom for Mother's Day, but she never responded. I think she may be in rehab again...

Now she won't know my new number when she gets out, so it's kinda sucky, I don't know if I'll ever hear from her again. She's not the best at keeping in touch, but I haven't changed my number in years, so she always had a way to call me when she was able.

On another, more pleasant note, I really liked the chapter, but I'm a little upset that Harry and Sev are drifting further apart. I hope something happens soon to force them closer together.

Oooh, you could have Sev find out about the Blood Quills! Yes??
schedule June 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Liked how Snape got Harry acquitted at his trial. Sad that Sirius basically blackmailed Harry into the years separation from Snape. Everyone appears to believe they know what's best for him as shown my Mrs Weasley's disapproval of Harry's relationship/marriage. So pleased that you continue to write and post this wonderful story.
person Anon
schedule May 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story!!! Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more!
person DhampirParadox
schedule May 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This Chapter must have been posted just hours after I'd read the last one *sneaksy* Glad to finally read it. The tension in their relationship is just killing me. I know Snape said "I won't wait for you" thing but I really hope they don't sleep with other people (even casually) during their time apart - though admittedly it is much more likely that if anyone will it'll be Snape and not Harry. *gaaaah* you have me on tenderhooks (and they're very tender!).

I'm all excited to see if you'll bring Umbridge into it. Also very curious to see if anything will happen with Remus (seeing he's mentioned in this chapter) or Cedric.

Thank you!
schedule May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
hi
great story
please keep updating
cullengal101
person Jan
schedule May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so happy that Sirius kicked Molly out, I always hated that everyone thought it was ok for her and Dumbledore do and say whatever they wanted in Sirius own home, no matter what he said, which I find to be the biggest insult you can give a host while your being a guess in there home. Please update chapter 27 soon ^_^