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for A Marriage of Convenience

by NinaSweets

person Pedal Drops
schedule August 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!! I love how Severus is written. I thought Harry now being fifteen would make him definitely not want to leave his husbands side, but I'm glad they're getting the opportunity to miss each other properly. Anyways keep up the awesome work. Thanks for writing even though your on a trip. :)
person Doodle_Penguin
schedule August 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nnnooooo!!! Come Back!!! I NEED more chapters!!! Please!!
schedule August 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I read all those chapters I caught up to you I'm really looking forward to the next chapter I really really hope that Snape and Harry get together and just stop playing around
schedule August 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i really do like this story
I hope they're able to comsumate their nuptials
schedule August 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far please say it's finished
Well onward to chapter 2
person atymer
schedule August 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love the characterizations in this story. Harry and Sev's verbal interactions are most entertaining, when they aren't dreadfully painful and barbed. I do wonder why Remus let the wolf loose, perhaps the experimental potions lowered his inhabitions or he was just so p.o. about the thought of Sev and Harry together? I remains a mystery I enjoy speculating over. Harry is trying so hard to hold onto his integrity, yet I do hope it doesn't get him killed. Disarming the old wanker won't keep Harry alive to fight another day. I was very happy when Siri tossed Molly out of the house, though I felt bad for the rest of the family. No one is perfect and Siri still has a lot of issues. Who doesn't? But Harry is not a baby, she needs to get over herself. I look forward to the next chapters. This is most entertaining! Kudos for the plot twists and avoiding repeats of canon's deaths and conclusions.
person Leania07
schedule August 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a huge ledge to leave one on. I've noticed the good stories one always has to wait for the next chapter, because one refuses to wait until it's completed. :P So they have a temporary split, which obviously pains Harry and Severus is attempting to act unbothered by it all...but we know his secret. So I've been trying to decipher what Severus' issue is; afraid to love or just afraid Harry will leave him? By leave I mean both die and/or no longer wish to be with him. Both seem adequate right now, and I suppose it could be both. You're very tricky; I like this story so far.

Leania
person Jan
schedule August 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
0_0 this relationship is rapidly going downhill, I hope they're able to mend it soon, please update chapter 28 soon.
person djaddict
schedule August 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am quite disappointed in Snape for not noticing his hand.
schedule August 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
hey
brilliant chapter
please keep up the good work
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