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Umbridge. That is who should die for sure. Even before the DOM, she could choke on her breakfast in the morning. Yeah, that would be good.

Got so excited about killing Umbridge, I forgot to say, yeah! New chapter. I love them snuggling in bed together.

I started reading this story and absolutely fell in love with it! I love your style of writing, I was upset when I saw it hadn't been updated but then I saw it had been and not going to lie I did a happy dance haha. I hope you continue this to the end because it's so addictive to read and plus I want to find out what happens in the end! Keep up the amazing work :)

It's definitely good to see Harry and Sev getting along again. So long as you don't kill either of them, I really don't care who dies. Although, I'm going to say, Neville doesn't deserve to die. Don't kill him, please.

Great chap! I truly love their relationship. Extremely Realistic. Looking forward to more greatness. :D Oh and Iooove possessive Sev too! 😄😄

I so love this. I reread chapter 30 first to refresh my memory about where you left off and I laughed and grinned through the whole chapter. It truly is a perfect masterpiece of a chapter. And I am SOOOOOO glad Harry was back to kissing and wanting to sleep with Severus. I hated him trying to separate himself from Snape. And Snape's inner monologue there at the end where he admits to himself that there was no way he was letting Harry go regardless and being all selfish and possessive... love love loved it! I just wanted to jump up and down over that.It perfectly fits Severus' personality too. As for the department of mysteries and who will die... how about Lucius? Lol I know I know no can do. But I think Severus will have to be gone for some reason because at this point Harry WOULD confide in him so the situation wouldn't even happen. So with Severus gone somewhere and Harry & friends going to save Sirius... I don't think you should kill off Sirius. It's too funny having him cowed by Remus and sending hate looks at Severus. How about Tonks? She's young and a girl so Harry would feel a lot of guilt but she doesn't really fit with Remus anyway and is a well-known character. She's totally the best one to go if someone has to go. Luna is too adorable, Neville is needed to kill the snake, Ginny is needed for jealousy, and Ron & Hermione... just...no. So nice to have a great update :)

I love your story and can't wait to read more. Please update again soon

I love your story and can't wait to read more. Please update again soon

I'm glad that Severus could reassure Harry that Voldemort didn't share his conscious. Liked how Lupin grounded Sirius and managed to get Harry to relax. Continue to enjoy reading your story.

Yay! They're kissing! Progress!

So good to see an update. I missed you!

More soon, please??