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June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Promising start. Would love to read more. =)
The age difference is a bit uncomfortable. But then, Harry's age has always been problematic in canon: 11-years-old boy burning a man to death? 12-years-old fighting a basilisk?
But, as I said before, this first chapter is intriguing and I always love a marriage-fic. Specially if it's snarry! ;)
The age difference is a bit uncomfortable. But then, Harry's age has always been problematic in canon: 11-years-old boy burning a man to death? 12-years-old fighting a basilisk?
But, as I said before, this first chapter is intriguing and I always love a marriage-fic. Specially if it's snarry! ;)
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June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just love this kind of story (forced to marry then finding out they love each other). Good start!!
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June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is off to a great start, however I'm worried that it's a tad rushed. I was surprised Severus was so willing to marry Harry. I'm interested to see where this is going to go, so please update soon.
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June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good start, Makes me wonder what are Snape's intentions, Good or bad?