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for A Marriage of Convenience

by NinaSweets

person Higashi
schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Promising start. Would love to read more. =)

The age difference is a bit uncomfortable. But then, Harry's age has always been problematic in canon: 11-years-old boy burning a man to death? 12-years-old fighting a basilisk?

But, as I said before, this first chapter is intriguing and I always love a marriage-fic. Specially if it's snarry! ;)
person delia cerrano
schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just love this kind of story (forced to marry then finding out they love each other). Good start!!
person jaybelle93
schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is off to a great start, however I'm worried that it's a tad rushed. I was surprised Severus was so willing to marry Harry. I'm interested to see where this is going to go, so please update soon.
person alma
schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good start, Makes me wonder what are Snape's intentions, Good or bad?