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for A Marriage of Convenience

by NinaSweets

person TRUgrit
schedule August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. Virgin Harry is always so cute! Can't wait for your next chapter!
person Marie-H
schedule August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Magnifique histoire! J'adore et j'ai h
person delia cerrano
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is so good!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope this is a long story. More humor than I expected..."Oh and detentionfor going into my private stores...", food fight...ha ha some married man!
person tabEkat
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is certainly an interesting solution to the tournament problem. It does make one wonder what Snape has planned for his future spouse.
person tabEkat
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So, they've done it. Can't help but wonder if Snape is going to clue into the fact that Harry's home life was not as he imagined. What was Petunia's reaction to releasing her nephew into marriage with an older wizard? Is there divorce in your magical universe? The magical spark between powerful couples seemed to indicate something quite binding.
person tabEkat
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Is Snape going to teach Harry about all the things he is obviously ignorant of in the magical world? I mean no one has ever even taught him how to floo properly. At the very least, I expect he'll be getting a serious sexual education and hope that he'll be bright enough to read the pamphlet that was provided by his head of house.

Am really looking forward to your next installment.
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story, it has just kind of got under my skin (in a good way). I really like how you have made Snape kind of "nice" without making him actually nice. He is being protective and supportive of Harry whilst still maintaining his character. Overall I am just really looking forward to reading more.
person Jan
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
How positively evil of Severus to say something like that to Harry after such a passionate moment ;)

Please update chapter 4.
person KarenLioncourt
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ooh this fic is so delicious. *smacks lips* Yum yum! :)
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hey
love the story so far please keep updating
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