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for A Marriage of Convenience

by NinaSweets

person kat9jr
schedule March 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Nina your story is great. I've binge read it every free minute until I caught up. Now I have to wait with everyone else. Not sure if catching up was a good thing or not.
person moodysavage
schedule March 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad that Sirius wasn't killed... or Hermione or Ron or Neville... but... you know. It's Luna. Everyone loves Luna too. It was probably a very hard choice to make and she was less needed for plot progression I know... but... it's Luna ya' know. She will be missed.
person Jan
schedule March 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Loved how it was the same plot as in the book, but with your own little dark twist in it, the fact that it was Neville that went after Luna was priceless, please update chapter 34 soon.
person AnonymousTigress
schedule March 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I can only imagine how Snape is going to be when Harry returns. Ooh, it's not going to be pretty. So sad Luna died. Keep on rolling. I am totally into this story.
person djaddict
schedule March 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You are not sorry, admit it. Absolutely brilliant maiming of Lucius Malfoy. And a Neville was righteous stabbing Bellatrix in the eye with his wand. Maybe she will die, yes? Luna? Really?
person Jan
schedule March 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ron 😱 hope he heals ok. I just love how Harry knows it's a trap, yet he feels he has time to see why a spheres has his name on it😂 Please update chapter 33 soon.
person ANON
schedule March 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ughhh!!!!
person Serena
schedule March 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
The only complaints are that it was too short and I hated the cliff hanger. I love the story. Are you going to stay true to the course and have Sirius die or go a different course and let him live? Are Harry and Severus going to stay together? How will Voldemort figure into this?
person djaddict
schedule March 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
No that would be... ARGH!!!! I hate it when Harry is so stupid. And that was basically most of the chapter. Loved Severus though.
person moodysavage
schedule March 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Meanie