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March 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wasn`t Harry 15 during the tournament? Or is my counting just messed up?
However, I really like your story. But I`ll just imagine Harry to be 15, makes me feel better. Maybe because that was the age when I started to be sexually active. And one is legal with 16, where I live... 14 makes me a tiny bit uncomfortable.
Anyway, I absolutely love your story!!
However, I really like your story. But I`ll just imagine Harry to be 15, makes me feel better. Maybe because that was the age when I started to be sexually active. And one is legal with 16, where I live... 14 makes me a tiny bit uncomfortable.
Anyway, I absolutely love your story!!
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March 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was amazing.... when is chapter 9 going to be uploaded?
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February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Your story has potential, but you should consider getting a beta reader to help you with the editing. Most of your punctuation is either wrong or missing. Also, the owner of this web site may pull your story if they have doubts about your age due to the level of your writing.
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February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter! What a kick...tehe...
on to the next chapter...its only7AM and I still need to go to sleep, but want to read
on to the next chapter...its only7AM and I still need to go to sleep, but want to read
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February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really, really hope, that Snape (Harry also) is not going to do something utterly foolish. This story is very well written and I really enjoyed reading it. (Also hope, that there will be update soon, but I understand, that you don't have much time.)
Well keep going, your story is great!
Well keep going, your story is great!
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February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
you are really evil person for stoping at the most passionate part
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February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic, I love the interactions between Harry and Snape, you write them perfectly! Please email me when you update! It's charlie-becks@manx.net
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February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVED THIS STORY...I WOULD LOVED ANOTHER CHAPTER...HARRY IS SO FUNNY AND SEVERUS IS HOT AND COLD....CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENED NEXT!!!
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February 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you for updating so soon! I absolutely love this story and love how you interpreted Harry and Severus relationship. It's not too angsty and not too 'jump on the bed the first chapter' type. Not that its bad but it's sometimes hard to find stories not like the other two.
I know you said you rarely update so quickly. But I hope you do soon.
I know you said you rarely update so quickly. But I hope you do soon.
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February 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it's heating up between my two favorite boys, I can't wait for chapter 9, hope it's soon ^_~