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Like the story so far hope you will be continuing with it soon

Of course there are marshmallows here, we're everywhere :P As for your age... I don't think you're that young I think that it's due o the story being from Harry's perspective and he is very young in this story. I like the story so far, especially that the relationship between Harry and Severus is progressing at a quite sedate pace, Because I hate when A forced marriage goes from zero to a million in a chapter.

I enjoy the story so far. I like the plot.
You asked if you seem young. I got the opinion you're in your teens. When you had Harry on Shapes lap and that teacher said "I'm trying to eat!' ... That's something I haven't heard since highschool. There's plenty of different reactions to have but that one is childish. On the other hand, you could have decided that's how Sinistra is.
I think your writing is good. Your voice in writing will mature with you; the more you read or interact with people the better understanding you will have of how to handle these things. I don't really see a generalized lack of maturity in your writing. It just pops up a few times.
I look forward to reading the next chapter. Your story has captured my interest.

i actually have no idea how old you are, or what the marshmallow thing is about. LOL but then, i am probably a lot older than most fanfic readers. as for music, i listen to old rock, stuff from the 60-80's when i want to chill.

hi loved the chapter cant wait for next one
cullengal101

Interesting...how old do we think you are. Younger than me but not all that young. Old enough to have read plenty and have a good handle on writing mechanics as well as a good knowledge of pacing, plot development and character development. If anything might make you seen young it's your choice to make Harry only fourteen years old. Most people with their own kids would not go there because it's creepy but you actually do good job of presenting Harry as his own age without being to mature and keep Snape from seeming like a pedophile but more as a protector who suddenly finds himself as a husband and trying to balance the two with Harrys age.

You do "read" on the young side - late teens maybe early 20's- whatever you are, it doesn't matter. I enjoy your writing and am finding this story delightful. Love the "dance" between Severus & Harry. Glad Harry is pushing Severus a bit and that he cares for him as well as feels sure that Sev cares for him also. Don't like that Cho! I'm jealous on Snape's behalf!
Also almost the same for Cedric. Hurry with the next chapters (yes chapters...I'm greedy) please. As I said I really like this story. Always partial to Severus/Harry...so opposite, so "cute", but similiar backgrounds, both strong independent people. Sort of mavericks.

I like this quite a lot.

I haven't reviewed a story in a really long time, but this one was really worth taking the time to praise the authoress. I really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. Please try to update soon there is just not enough Snape/Harrys out there that actually don't ruin their characters with OOCness

Wow, they are soo cute:)
I am looking forward to your next update!!