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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 11
I thought it was a good chapter. I liked the way Dumbledore turned the tables on Draco, though honestly I can't see Draco admitting what he'd done quite that easily. And since Snape isn't outright attacking Harry with his Legilimency and is giving him slightly more helpful instructions than he did in canon, maybe the Occlumency lessons will be successful this time.
McGonagall wants to talk to Harry and doesn't seem happy about it. Does it have to do with the Second Task? Maybe someone thinks Harry should be Cedric's "thing he would most miss," or whatever the exact phrase was? It's a good thing Severus went with Harry. I can't see him letting that happen.
I thought it was a good chapter. I liked the way Dumbledore turned the tables on Draco, though honestly I can't see Draco admitting what he'd done quite that easily. And since Snape isn't outright attacking Harry with his Legilimency and is giving him slightly more helpful instructions than he did in canon, maybe the Occlumency lessons will be successful this time.
McGonagall wants to talk to Harry and doesn't seem happy about it. Does it have to do with the Second Task? Maybe someone thinks Harry should be Cedric's "thing he would most miss," or whatever the exact phrase was? It's a good thing Severus went with Harry. I can't see him letting that happen.
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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hi love the story so far cant wait for next chapter is harry going to be Cedric's person he has to save will Severus even let that happen ohhhh cant wait please keep updating
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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
that was just amazing.
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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think this is the first time I've read a perspective from Snape and DD that shows they know harry has to die and the effect it has on Snape. I mean, we all know from canon that Snape and DD know he has to die, but usually we don't get to see what that does to Snape and how he handles it. Bravo!
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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter. I love to cheecky Harry is.
But,oh man, Snapw won't be happy about what McGonagall wants. Poor Cedric! I just know it has something to do with him.
But,oh man, Snapw won't be happy about what McGonagall wants. Poor Cedric! I just know it has something to do with him.
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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry & Severus seem to be getting together very nicely if only Dumbledore would stay out of it! He's a mean twinkly eyed know it all manipulative short sighted man that I wouldn't trust as far as I could throw him (I wish!). Now that's a run on sentence...really run away sentence.
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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
please update again soon im curious to see what this sudden meeting is about.
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March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really fun chapter!(and I never noticed if there were any missing "w's" or "s's") Love it when Severus and Harry remember they are married - so tender - just what they both need...someone to love and care for and someone to love and care for them.
I wish they would realize that they don't either one want to give each other up...that it is a real marriage...soon. Then it would be them against Voldemort and everyone else.
I wish they would realize that they don't either one want to give each other up...that it is a real marriage...soon. Then it would be them against Voldemort and everyone else.
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March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hi
I am still loving this story cant wait for the next chapter please keep updating
cullengal101
I am still loving this story cant wait for the next chapter please keep updating
cullengal101
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March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I absolutely loved this chapter. I can't wait for chapter 11, hope it's soon ^_^