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for A Marriage of Convenience

by NinaSweets

person xikum
schedule May 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this fic! I have literally read thousands of HP fics, mostly Snarries, as that's my favorite ship. This is different than most = Usually I can predict what's going to happen, but not here. I like that!
person Lia Bailey
schedule May 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Damn. Hate that Cedric was only due to a love potion... but then this is Harry/Severus Story! Great story so far. You definately should do a Harry/Ced!
person vitycar
schedule May 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
gostei muito
person tina
schedule May 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor snape, just when it was getting really good for him they had to stop... ;)
person milapink
schedule April 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this couple. The story is fantastic. Harry will stay with Severus on vacation?
I'm curious to read more.
person Jan
schedule April 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, ls glad Remus is back, I hope you find a way to make him stay permanently, cause he's a really good teacher, please update chapter 15 soon ^_^
schedule April 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hi
absolutely loved the chapter please keep updating
cullengal101
person snape_lust
schedule April 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
lol, i love the elf cockblocking Snape as it were and Snape laughing about it. That was a classic line "did i break it" (paraphrasing here). I also love how harry is more and more comfortable with discussing his relationship with Snape without shame or embarrassment. so comfortable in fact that he can tease and smirk just like Snape. I love every update and look forward to more. Would harry consider changing schools to escape everyone's plot's or is he becoming too attached to Snape to ever consider that? I'll have to re-read this story again because the details are a bit hazy. i'm wondering about any bonding ceremony they had and the ramifications on the two of them.
person BAFan
schedule April 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 13 & 14

Two very good chapters. I thought the change to the Second Task made perfect sense; why would Harry be in the maze during the Third Task, after all? And this way Cedric survived, which is all to the good. I hated his death in the book. Are we going to find out what happened when Severus finally answered Voldie's summons?

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schedule April 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's a really good story and I'm glad that you're still writing