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for A Marriage of Convenience

by NinaSweets

schedule August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Found your story. Enjoying reading your version of Harry's life. Like how you have created Snape, his demeanour is consistent throughout your story. Impressed with how canon like Ron is in your story. Looking forward to reading further chapters of your story.
schedule August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
brilliant idea to get out of it :)
schedule August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, hope you finish it :)
person Morgan
schedule August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is really amazing keep up the good work. I never thought I'd buy into a Snarry fic but I'm in! Swallowed it hook line and sinker. It's funny, steamy, exciting, suspenseful. I love it I just love it!!
person Marron
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a surprise. I had completly forgotten about this story and was therefore pleasantly surprised.
A pissed off Snape was very entertaining.
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hey
great chapter please keep updating
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person delia cerrano
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sooo glad you are continuing this story!! Loved all the byplay between Harry and Severus and also the comments between Harry/Hermione/Ron. Love the relationship growing between the Potter-Snapes. Wonder how honest Lupin will be in talking to Harry about events/feelings between Severus and the Maurauders?
person snape_lust
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yay! a new update! I very much enjoy this story and this chapter, with hermione and ron giving harry advice on how to calm down an angry spouse was funny but sad at the same time. 14 year old's shouldn't need to give that sort of advice :-)
schedule July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hello there! I'm a bit rusty at reviewing but I'll do my best. - Very nice. I do love Snarry when it's written well. Characters properly represented and development that moves forward sensibly. Also the angst...I'm an angst whore and you have just enough to keep it interesting without making it borderline depressing, tempered with well-placed humor. Situations often have me thinking of how it could be funny, and that's only human nature. I am enjoying Severus' slow descent into affection. He's an intelligent person, logical & methodical, and love can be very illogical and vexing for such a person who likes to pigeon-hole everything in it's proper place. I also applaud your excellent grasp of intelligent dialogue that flows naturally and is easy to follow. I well ignore typos as they are insignificant when weighed against the skill it takes to weave a tale. Any number of people can proofread (or beta) for one, but only talent can make a story come alive. Very well done. I look forward to more and hopefully a conclusion. Thank you for sharing your imagination.
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing!!!I can't wait for you to write more.