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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great update, thank you.
The formatting on this chapter was a bit difficult to read, with there being no space between the paragraphs though, so that might be something you want to watch in future.
Looking forward to the next update. :)
The formatting on this chapter was a bit difficult to read, with there being no space between the paragraphs though, so that might be something you want to watch in future.
Looking forward to the next update. :)
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. Funny but also sweet. But somehow I doubt that the potion is going to work as it should.
Well, things are interestng.
Well, things are interestng.
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story! That session with fudge being the marriage counselor was just hilarious. A wand through the eye of a needle lol.
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Your story has potential, but I recommend that you get a beta reader to help you edit your story and to clear out the plot holes.
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hey
great chapter please keep updating
cullengal101
great chapter please keep updating
cullengal101
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter, 19 please ^_~
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was getting ready to scream at the thought of Severus and Harry being separated. Thankfully not true and their three way conversation including Dumbledore after that was sooo funny. So crazy about them as a couple...I hope Harry does get pregnant. I think they would be so good together with a child given their childhoods...so funny also.
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November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ok that Minister needs to go ok !!!! Harry and Snape in this story have me laughing so much.......BTW loved the update and thanks for it see you soon !!!!!
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October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh I think I'd like it best as a long chaptered story. This is one of my favorite stories!! Love Harry/Severus. They are still the perfect couple in my mind. Can't wait to hear what Sev wants to talk to Harry about. It can't be good since Dumbledore is there pushing him to talk. I love all Harry & Sev's "sweet moments and kisses". They make me laugh and make me want to go ohhhh sometimes at the same time. Please don't write anything that makes them break up. That would be waaay to terribly sad.
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October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Definitely enjoying this. Can't wait for more. :)