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Oh please please please write more soon!!! I just found this wonderful story and I love it more than life itself. Sometimes I am so picky with what I read I feel sort of terrible. The characters have to be done well, situations need to be believable, the story must be good and make sense. It must be suspenseful, have romance and fun. I could go on with how amazingly picky I am ... And if often leads to me shuffling through hundreds of stories and feeling like I am spoiled ... By perfect stories like this :-)

I LOVE your characters, and your story is even more amazing. I have caught myself a few times in your plot thinking "out of the thousands of Harry Potter stories I have read how have I never seen this? It's brilliant!". I am so excited to see where this all goes. Thank you so much for writing this and I look forward to more!!!

You have made me so happy with another update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but those fingers you made me fall off the chair here !! I wonder who's hope their the rats and not Snape's family !!!!!! THANK YOU for this !!!!!!!!!

The date was awesome. They were nervous, awkward, and Harry was trying so hard. I was happy to see Severus meet him at least a quarter of the way. The kiss in front of Neville made me chuckle. I'm sure it made Severus smirk as well. Oh, and Severus' possessiveness was a treat. I love possessive Snape...sigh.

hi
great chapter really loved it
specifically the date so cute
please update soon
cullengal101

"Curioser, and curioser," said Alice. ^_~

This story just keeps getting better! And thank you for spoiling us with such frequent updates, recently! ^_^

(BTW, Severus teasing Neville with his kissing Harry rather passionately? Two thumbs up!!!)

That's funny, you didn't strike me as a waffler😋. Harry was so cutely awkward asking Snaps out( and Severus did not make it easy either!) Harry was also cutely (and deliberately) oblivious during the date itself. Excellent update!

Awesome!!! And soooo mean!!!

I just realized that the review I just did on the last chapter is my first review for this story, ever. So, I need to do a review on the whole story too. Sorry, I haven't done a review before but I kinda read this story all in one go before and by the time I was done I was exhausted and forgot. The characterizations are spot on. In most Snarry's not only is Ron unhappy about Harry dating Snape but it usually ends their friendship. They never take into account the fact of how loyal Ron is to Harry. They also make Harry and Snape jump into bed too soon or make Severus completely change his mind about Harry's character too soon. They don't take into account how stubborn and just plain contrary Severus can be or how strong-willed Harry can be ( which is why Harry can throw the imperious curse). Nor do they realize how perceptive Snape actually is, that Severus might know exactly what Harry's personality and character is like and Snape's own cynicism makes him think that Harry is immature, which makes Harry and Professor Snape get along like oil and water. So, any relationship between them not only would mean hard work and effort on both their parts but it would also mean at least a slight change of personality on both their parts. Harry has to be more mature, more willing to compromise and Snape has to be less cynical and less bitter about the past. You're showing that, which makes this fic very well written indeed.

Thank you 2 updates and so close together I'm in heaven !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Snape needs fixing so Lupin can get out !!!!!!!!!!

I very much enjoyed this chapter!


I don't think I have much to specifically comment on, but a good old fashioned introspection is always good for the soul.... and the characters in a story :-)

I look forward to more of this most engaging story!