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for A Marriage of Convenience

by NinaSweets

person Jan
schedule February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!! I don't want Severus to go to that mad man! And poor Viktor, hate that he's gone :( please update chapter 23 soon.
schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering how you would write the 3rd task. Well done. Had all the excitement and suspense needed for the dramatic return of Voldemort. Sad that Krum had to be a casualty but totally understandable for the plot to continue. Now Severus will be pulled apart by the two powerful Wizards, all the while attempting to keep Harry safe. Looking forward to the next dramatic chapter.
person badaxx17
schedule February 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god so good so the dead fingers have a reason thank god for that cause thats just nasty sendin people fingers anyways when will see a change in severus
schedule February 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
hey
great chapter
was not expecting krum to die or even the cup to still b a portkey
really enjoyed chapter
I would love to know what the six rings actually spell out
also why severus believes it less leverage
I wonder how the meeting goes between severus and voldemort
please keep updating
cullengal101
person higashi
schedule February 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
An awsome chapter, full of tension and wonderfully paced.

All those snippets of normal banter between the characters were a nice counterpoint while waiting for the other shoe to drop. That is to say, everything was normal, and then it wasn't. And it won't be for a while.


PS Yes, Harry, you've to take care of yourself. Think of the little one! *laugh*
person staar
schedule February 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the update...wow poor Krum ....the minister is so dumb !!!!! so all of Snape's family got killed
person ChaosLady
schedule February 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
An eventful chapter. The more things change, the more they stay the same- in other words Fudge is still an idiot.
person badaxx17
schedule February 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god so confused but i love it please update sooooooon
person slmncpm
schedule February 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow, snape. *laughs* that last line was divine!
schedule February 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That certainly made me sit up. What a cliffhanger! Really like their date in the kitchens. Getting Snape to talk, soften his cheery personality was funny to read. Nearly as amusing as Neville just about passing out when the two kissed at the end of their date. Looking forward to reading more of your wonderful story.